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Description page 17 of Dragon Ball - Embraced Ancestry

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Aright, people...I've been pretty inactive these weeks... And the unioversity is to blame for dat.. I had to make mah way through essays, tests, exams and the biggest foe of them all: the thesis. Took my some time. I have just arrived from London again, and the lil journey gave me some time to sketch up the panels of page 17. And here it is....
Not a big deal, I just took a lil journey in Bardock's mind For those who dun' have a clue what the hell teen Gohan, Cell, and Goku are doin' there, here's a recap of the original Bardock story: In the movie, Bardock was "cursed" and he attained the ability to see bits and pieces of the future. He cannot control this ability, it just bursts out randomly, especially when he is rather emotional; mad, angry, exhausted, etc.. At this point - in my comic - he alredy saw bits of Goku's early years and how he grew up, so he knows what sorta clothes he's wearing, etc... That's why he seems to recognize him (bottom right panel), but he cannot interpret his blonde hair and blue eyes. Not to mention Gohan and Cell... He does not have a clue that it is his own grandson he is looking at. Well, this soldier got to kick Bardock's stomach, and that unexpected hit caused him to have this vision... Only problem with that is that he is rather helpless when he has these visions of the future (Just have a look at the movie)... Yeah well.. so much for that.
I had great fun doing Gohan and Cell, since they have absolutely nothing to do with my storyline So it was kinda nice to be a bit different this time... Anyways, I liked sketching it, that is all that matters to me


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Hun:

Nyurgafej: - MÖGÖTTEM LENNE!!
Bardock: Ne... már megint.
Bardock: Mi történik?
Bardock: Ki...Ki ez a kölyök?..Én...
Bardock: Én nem értem... Várj... Ez ő?
Bardock: Ugyanaz az öltözet.. de... mégis másmilyen... Én...Én nem is tudom. Ki vagy te?

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Na jó, emberek, itt vagyok. Tudom, elég inaktív voltam az elmúlt hetekben... És erről csakis az egyetem tehet. Le kellett alázni dolgozatokat, esszéket, vizsgákat, és persze a legnyüvesebb ellenfelet: a szakdolgozatot. Beletelt némi időbe, de itt vagyok. Épp most értem haza Londonból, és a kis utazás alatt alkalmam volt kicsit skiccelgetni, meg is csináltam a paneleket. És hát, ez lett belőle...
Nem nagy cucc, ezúttal belemásztam Bardock fejébe. Azok kedvéért, akik nem tudják, mit keres ott a fiatal Gohan, Cell és Goku, gyorsan megmagyarázom: Az eredeti mesében Bardockot "megátkozták", hogy lássa a jövőt. Ez igazából nem hangzik átoknak, de azért kapta, hogy látnia kelljen, hogyan fog a népe kipurcanni. Nem tudatosan használja a képességet, csak úgy magától néha-néha kitör belőle. Általában akkor, amikor valamilyen szélsőséges állapotban van: fáradt, mérges, dühöng, támad, ilyesmi... Ezen a ponton már darabokban látta, hogyan nő fel a fia, Goku, hogy fog kinézni felnőttként, látta a ruházatát...stb.. Ezért is ismeri fel valamennyire a jobb alsó panelen, de a szőke hajat és kék szemet nem tudja hova tenni, fingja sincs, mi az a szuper csillagharcos (magyarul még mindig ratyin hangzik ). Arról nem beszélve, hogy nem tudja, ki Cell, és nem ismerheti fel Gohant, a saját unokáját sem. Hát, ezúttal a nyurgafejű katona váratlan rúgása billentette ebbe az állapotba, csak ahogy az a mesében is kiderült, ilyenkor nincs tudatában önamgának és elég kiszolgáltatottá válik Evvan.

Elég jó móka volt Gohant és Cellt skiccelgetni, főleg, mivel semmi közük a sztorihoz... ugyebár teljesen más idősíkról beszélünk... Jó volt kicsit kiszakadni a megadott jelenetekből, és ilyeneket skiccelni. No mindegy, a lényeg, hogy poén vót csinálni..



*Dragon Ball Z characters (c) Akira Toriyama*
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Comments: 92

carlosthemanoflove In reply to ??? [2011-06-06 06:22:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like him this way... I know it's pretty hard to digest after the typical toriyama style...but I appreciate that you can still find Gohan lieable

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ilex9 [2011-06-02 15:36:47 +0000 UTC]

I am still enjoying this. I also really like your interpretation of bad ass teenaged Gohan.

I'm just starting to work on learning to at least understand some Hungarian, so having your translations there is great too.

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to ilex9 [2011-06-02 15:57:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, miss

But why would you ever want to learn hungarian at any level? it is one wretched language (plus do not take every translation for granted, I most likely went for the content, rather than word to word translation - but if you have questions regarding the hungarian words, I will help you anytime.. I am a translator myself )

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ilex9 In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-06-04 04:07:10 +0000 UTC]

You are totally welcome. I have really enjoyed your spin on my favorite series.

I have family in Hungary and would like to visit someday without being mostly clueless, among other reasons. I did catch a little that these were not necessarily word for word translations, which is one reason I like that you have it in both languages so I can try figuring things out. Of course the universal language of visual narrative helps. (And like I said, this one is just so much fun! )

It is very kind to offer your help, thanks for that. I will certainly ask if I have a specific question.

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to ilex9 [2011-06-04 07:28:46 +0000 UTC]

I'm flattered again Aaaalrighty then Althoug hthis comic does not have long sentences to work with ah well..I wish you luck with the HUN language...one of the hardest and weirdest of them all Ok, if you have a question, just lemme know

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PawcioKy [2011-05-29 08:25:28 +0000 UTC]

Next page, PLEASE. I'm fan of this story.

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to PawcioKy [2011-05-29 09:24:04 +0000 UTC]

Gee pal, thanks a billion I'm glad you like this sillyness.

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YelZamor [2011-05-25 15:59:56 +0000 UTC]

What a tVist!
Schweet page.
Gohan looks like Vegeta did more time-traveling than previously suggested. **

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to YelZamor [2011-05-25 16:01:10 +0000 UTC]

I laik yer Gohan-Vegeta-Time-Travel-theory I kinda like him this way for sum reason

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YelZamor In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-06-01 16:13:51 +0000 UTC]

Plot bunny ahoy!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to YelZamor [2011-06-01 16:21:08 +0000 UTC]

yup. you are.

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YelZamor In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-06-01 16:38:16 +0000 UTC]

Oi! I meant, uh... the other thing.
Anyway, a flashback and Goku still not getting it would be in order.

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to YelZamor [2011-06-01 16:51:42 +0000 UTC]

that's you and what am I? hey dude..just screwing with ya
uhm...you mean that Goku wouldn't udnerstand a thing if he had a flashback? well...yepp.. that would be in character.

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BK-81 [2011-05-24 19:58:00 +0000 UTC]

POW!!! Outch-a-rooney!!! Didn't work, Bardack!
So his vision reach until Cell? Wow. Must bs strange to see this trange blondies.... and this even stranger alien-insect-guy who gets his ass kicked. Must be a nice shock. Did he make 1+1? (Money'n'math???) I guess su, looking at the last panel.
I like your version of the SSj, Gohan and Goku don't look too similar, its good for me. ^^ The boy's got quite a nose, almost Pinocchio!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to BK-81 [2011-05-24 20:13:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah well, can't win em all..XD not even if you are as cool as this saiyan monkey yeah... int he original story he should be dead by now...and when he died he only saw things until the face-off of goku and freeza. in this story, the fact that he is still alive makes his visions a bit more random and complex Well, He doesnt have a clue who Gohan and Cell is... he seems to recognize Goku,though... but he is not sure... he already saw the clothing and the face in the previous visions (as we learned in the original story), but blond hair, ftw? He must be really confused Yeah, I wanted Gohan to have strange characteristics, and this longish nose just has thsi strange adolescent feeling to me

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MrsNox [2011-05-19 10:05:41 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!!!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to MrsNox [2011-05-19 10:10:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you glad you like it this way

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BlackKusanagi [2011-05-17 22:42:30 +0000 UTC]

Maaan. You never cease to amaze me.

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to BlackKusanagi [2011-05-17 23:03:22 +0000 UTC]

aint that nice from you it's not the greatest page...but i had fun with it thank you

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BlackKusanagi In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-05-17 23:08:46 +0000 UTC]

Haha. Ive just finally started cutting into the crapton of pictures in wait, so I decided to comment on this one. Been loving the comic!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to BlackKusanagi [2011-05-17 23:10:48 +0000 UTC]

Gee..I'm honored. really I am cheers

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PrincessKalina123 [2011-05-16 23:50:44 +0000 UTC]

USELESS ASS PSYCHIC POWERS!!!

Lol another great comic! I love me some badass Gohan!
(Before he turns all nerdy daddy and has the demon spawn known as Pan )

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to PrincessKalina123 [2011-05-17 03:56:00 +0000 UTC]

Exactly my thoughts when I made the page Gotta love the abridged-bardock Yeah...ssj2 Gohan was the best of them all Gohanz..I hate the squeeky kid before and the nerdy geek afterwards I tried to capture the only badass period of his life thanks for the remark

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PrincessKalina123 In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-05-17 04:02:09 +0000 UTC]

I know.....why couldnt he stay a BADASS?!? I blame 4kidz network and Videl

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to PrincessKalina123 [2011-05-17 08:17:00 +0000 UTC]

And Chichi...for cutting his balls off

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trunks887 [2011-05-15 20:17:30 +0000 UTC]

awesomeee!!!!!!!!!!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to trunks887 [2011-05-15 21:28:54 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm glad you find it likeable

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trunks887 In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-05-15 23:35:03 +0000 UTC]

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Into-TheWild [2011-05-15 19:45:40 +0000 UTC]

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Into-TheWild [2011-05-15 19:46:08 +0000 UTC]

and a to you, too

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Into-TheWild In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-05-15 19:57:08 +0000 UTC]

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Drwer4DBZ [2011-05-15 15:29:22 +0000 UTC]

like how goku and vegeta were there then bardock came outta nowhere

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Drwer4DBZ [2011-05-15 16:25:44 +0000 UTC]

no-no-no-no..it is the other way around. Remember the original plot? King Vegeta was killed by Freeza onh is ship when he and a group of saiyans tried to assault Freeza. In the meantime, Bardock survived the attack of Dodoria and some soldiers.. and headed back to attack Freeza..that is when Freeza came out of the ship and launched a huge ball towards hima nd the whole Saiyan planet. So..that was the original plot. In this time, goku is just a little baby, and vegeta is just a kid.

BUT it is the adult Goku and Vegeta who showed up from nowhere. hence changed the course of time..Freeza did not kill King Vegeta so far, and he did not even go out to face Bardock, as you can see... See my point? noone knows Goku and Vegeta as adults.... see it now?

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Drwer4DBZ [2011-05-15 13:30:58 +0000 UTC]

love it so awesome even tho most of the time i don't know what's going on!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Drwer4DBZ [2011-05-15 14:52:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you what seems to cause confusion? I'll try to clear those things up

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TaylorKaye [2011-05-15 06:41:28 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could draw action scenes

yours is super-mega-ultra awesome!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to TaylorKaye [2011-05-15 06:45:54 +0000 UTC]

I can't really draw action-scenes...overall, most of mah comic so far is one endless pile o monologues but I am grateful for your comment...really appreciate it

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TaylorKaye In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-05-15 07:39:30 +0000 UTC]

no problem :3 .........but you DO draw action scenes very well! End of discussion!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to TaylorKaye [2011-05-15 14:53:56 +0000 UTC]

Okay...never argue with a gal full o rage

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TaylorKaye In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-05-16 02:57:12 +0000 UTC]

thats right!~ it's just not smart

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to TaylorKaye [2011-05-16 08:08:58 +0000 UTC]

yup

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Kibate [2011-05-15 06:17:37 +0000 UTC]

Seeing those characters is indeed a nice change of pace

(though gohans face looks a bit too old^^")

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Kibate [2011-05-15 06:36:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you At first that is what I thought, too. Then I got accustomed to it, since the little boy gohan and teen gohan in the cartoon were not really distinguished regarding face, n stuff. I made him a badass teen..cause that is what I had in mind when he turned into an ssj2 he is sleak and slim like a teen, not well-built, and has the badass look in his eyes with almost none of the adult wrinkles

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quidwitch [2011-05-14 22:26:18 +0000 UTC]

Gohan looks freaking evil. Bye bye cute 11yr old...
I love this comic, it's a cool concept that should've been integrated into the original plot

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to quidwitch [2011-05-14 22:29:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a billion Well yeah, he did kinda turn into a badass evil boy when he turned into ssj2, that's what I wanted to visualize, too I'm glad you like the concept

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HomolaGabor [2011-05-14 22:12:25 +0000 UTC]

Jóféle Erre nem számítottam Nem gondoltam volna, hogy Gohant, és Cell-t is látni majd a történetedben Nekem bejön Várom a következő oldalt

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to HomolaGabor [2011-05-14 22:27:41 +0000 UTC]

köszi. egyébként pont ezért volt jó móka skiccelni..mert semmi közük alapvetően a sztorihoz de ilyen formában be lehetett csempészni őket... Elvégre nem hagyható figyelmen kívül Bardock ezen képessége

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spacedin [2011-05-14 21:19:43 +0000 UTC]

The wild Goku has evolved!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to spacedin [2011-05-14 21:22:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeah..tell that to Bardock He doesn't know what to make out of the blonde hair and blue eyes

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spacedin In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-05-15 23:23:21 +0000 UTC]

He's thinking "Why can't I have wavy blonde hair and blue eyes? I want to look pretty too!"

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