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CaraKhan — ClockTown.Revised
Published: 2007-03-29 04:16:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 5495; Favourites: 86; Downloads: 88
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Updated version of the clocktower, but something is still off, i dunno what. Help!Related content
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I think it'll be better if you change the wooden fence into a metallic one. One that is made with iron bars put together. And instead of vines growing in the wooden fence, gears would, in the slits of the iron bars.
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Thanks again, but I was going for everything to be made of wood and stone. This has already made its way to completion in my animation as well, so it won't be changed: [link]
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Your work is so amazing... You will be famous animator one day and create something as super as simpsons;DD I believe in you.
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It needs more gears, clockwork, and complication. It looks more like a town with clockwork than a Clockwork town.
I usually associate clockwork with dark to grayish tones, and warped atmosphere that suggests mystery. The light and open clockwork town is a different idea and I like it.
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I agree, I spent a long time concepting the look of this film and I ended up scrapping everything and starting over way too late. This is only the first incarnation but I don't think the final outcome was much better. [link] if you'd like to see. Thanks for your critque, I appreciate it
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That's a touching piece. Though I don't like the way I interpreted it. It says to me that I belong in just one place, and if I accept that, I'll be happier than trying to escape.
Even if I consider it from the standpoint of the gear woman, I'm a bit depressed.
I really liked the way it all looked in black and white, but then, that's my preference. :+D
You're welcome for the critique. It's good practice for us both, hey? :+)
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Its more of a story of the ultimate sacrifice of oneself, a truly selfless deed. She wasn't even supposed to get the balloon, but friends wanted to see her get rewarded. I didn't make it obvious in the movie, but the balloons are conscious so she's no longer alone. But I kind of did want to make people sad
I also like the way it looks muted better, i designed the story somewhat around having an excuse to do it. Thanks again!
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You're welcome. :+D I wish inspiration for your current project!
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oh my I wanna move and live there now 
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this reminds me of labyrinth, harry potter, and the nightmare before Christmas.
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this makes me think of harry potter, labyrinth, and nightmare before Christmas.
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I think that if anythings wrong(which there is positively nothing wrong in my honest opinion) would be the fence. It's wood. Nothing else is wood. . .it should be metal or iron or something else. . .or have metal "repairs" to it Since it was an abandoned town. . .shouldn't the wooden fence be in need of SOME sort of repairs. . .?
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this is the most awesomely stempunk thing iv ever seen ( i think i'll buy a house there )
I hereby award you the awesomely Woot Worthy award (delivery of trophy may be permanently delayed)
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haha thats fucking awesome, thank you! It will be in 3d soon, the animation should be up by next march-ish.
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Hi love it
I dont think something's missing
Well maybe.. there's some suspense about the whole scene, theres gotta be a evil creature of something like that somewhere. Master of the tower or a guardian maybe
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Wow... that is BREATHTAKING... LOVE IT!! Beautiful warm pallet, and great use of green as the shadow.. and GREAT design..
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Maybe add a giant pendulum that swishes through the center of the tower? Comes out one side, then goes back in, then comes out the other side..?
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Thanks for the advice. Unfortunately it doesn't fit with the story of the piece, there is no pendulum in the tower. But that is a cool idea! Maybe I'll make another version just for myself.
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mooo i love your imagination >3👍: 0 ⏩: 0
WOW it looks really good.. hmm maybe you can add people or plants?
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The only possibly thing i can think to add is some trees, but other than that it looks awesome
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Maybe I could add some trees with little cogs hanging like apples or something. Thanks for the help!
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Glad i could be of service
Trees and cogwheels sounds awesome
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This is honestly amazing, but if you're looking for advice, yeah, something around the fence. Ivy, plant growth, something to signify that the place is really dead.
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Maybe some more people here and there? A couple of merchent tents or whatever in the background? Maybe some stuff around the fence?
And yes... I'm totally thinking about Gadgetzan or whatever from World of Warcraft. I really love this though.
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The town is dead when she enters it, thats the reason for the lack of people. But it was a good idea anway, thanks! lol As for stuff around the fence, I just wish I knew what it should be...
I actually don't play world of warcraft, so I don't know what you're talking about, heh.
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Whooooooops. I thought you did, haha.
Maybe you could have like wrenches and other tools scattered around? Or signs of an attack or something as to why the town's dead? I can't remember what you wrote down for the original...
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good job on this piece.
the whole submission looks nice
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