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Tears from a blue sky coming downscreaming, just waiting to be found
those eyes, closed watching you sleep I,
never felt this way but I,
just need a little time.
and hope you come around.
sadness creeping into me and,
darkness ripping at my skin
it's suffocating, medicating, sometimes just too hard to stand
get up
breathe, into my heart your song,
its tearing me apart i wish you could come around to see this life you left for me.
all i need is just a little time.
your fears, there weighing me down
don't want to be scared anymore
and the stars are gone is there something wrong with me?
and death, slowly washing in my brain
it's making me insane.
Touch, my body and my soul
with no strings left to pull
I wish you would just come around
cause all i need is a little time.
you put a smile on my face
something special, hard to replace
can't get you off my mind
when i look insde...
and feel the rain pour down ahead
washing out what you said
i'm lying here inside a shell of hope.
it's like i said, all i need is a little time.
and feel the sun finally come out
its warmth drying all my tears
feeling whole once more
stepping through that open door.
it's like i said, all i need is just a little time...
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That was really good. I'm not a big writer of peoetry, I was never really good at it, but I like this. Good job!
~Vampire Blood Rose
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cool thanks...i'm not too good either...at least not the way my english teacher wants me to write...but i appreaciate your comment!
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English teachers are perfectionist writers, or else they wouldn't be teaching english! That's the way I think of it, so try not to let your teacher get to you.
~Vampire Blood Rose
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thanx i'll try...so hows life where ever you are?
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It's okay, things could be better, but I'm having fun annoying my parents. How about you, your perfectionist english teacher aside of course lol
~Vampire Blood Rose
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ugh...yea...well i can't say i'm all too happy... it's mid term week for us so i'm craming like crazy right now...awww man i love annoying my parents in the car...
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Oh yes, that just takes the cake! Especially when they get so annoyed they pull the car over on the side of the high way, get out of the car and scream at you through the car window. It's even better when you stare at them, blink a couple times when they're done yelling, and just fall over laughing at them! ^_^
~Vampire Blood Rose
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lol, XD, 
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Oh wow...my parents have never done that to me. Though they like to call me a nerd...some parents they are.
~Vampire Blood Rose
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well i don't think your a nerd..,
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Thanks, I'm glad someone doesn't. So how was your Halloween?
~Vampire Blood Rose
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seems like i've been sayin this all day...but...what eves...i stayed home and passed out candy, was attacked by popcorn, did math homework, played my flute, watched movies, and declared the rest of the candy bowl as my own!...whew...you?
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I went with my brothers and mom. My dad was at work. Out of my three brothers and myself, I got the most candy. Of course I traded with my brothers when we got home and then the candy I didn't want, I told them they could have 4 pieces for a dollar, safe to say I got my moneys worth!
~Vampire Blood Rose
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I was happy. I'm stashing it away for a later date. Just in case something happens, that and for the awesome junk food in the school caf!
~Vampire Blood Rose
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lol...very nice...
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Not really. Just wrote something and then posted it. How about you? Anything exciting happen?
~V. Blood Rose
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not yet...our school play opens friday...i guess you could call that exciting?...but really nothing much...just listening to music...
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If you're in it, other wise it doesn't get up there in the fun scale very far. Music is always fun, especially when you get those really funny songs like 'Barney's on Fire' that's always been a favorite of mine.
~V. Blood Rose
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Barney's on fire? don't think i've herd of that one yet...but yes funny songs are the best...i love matchbox 20's Your so Real...
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Yeah, it's really funny. I'd give you a link to it, but I don't have one.
~V. Blood Rose
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that's okay...so done anything interesting latly?
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Not really, just hoping that my aunt has a healty baby, she's due in a week or so. Other than that, it's been pretty boring. It's not even december and my mom is in a frenzy about Christmas, and how she hopes that she has enough wrapping paper. How about you? Anything amazingly awesome?
~v. Blood Rose
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emmmm...not yet...OH Matchbox20 is coming to town so that's cool i guess..congrats to your aunt for having a baby!...yeah i'm just sort of waiting for my parents to go crazy about christmas...in fact every year my fam has this xmas party, i just hope we can go this year...but yeah like i said nothing much...
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Cool, I love Christmas parties! We never have one. Gotta love when Christmas rolls around right? Lots of presents and you stress your parents out over the simplest things like a card. My dad doesn't do holidays, it's mostly my mom and my grandma.
~V. Blood Rose
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yeah my dad just kind of sit's back and cracks the jokes around here...yeah it's pretty fun getting together with everybody, but were all kind of drifting apart...my cousin called me the other night for no reason, and we spent about an hour talking small talk, and sitting in silence...but yes christmas is lovely...lots of snow...and pretty shiny wrapping paper...though this year since my sis and i birthday's are around the same time my mom wanted to loop our bday parties on the same day...if that makes sense...ugh...but isn't it kind of fun to watch your parents stress out over nothing?
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Oh yes, parents get busy like bees and run all over the place going 'where'd I put it? Where should I hide them? AH!!!!' and then they're like 'Oh...' my dad doesn't like to do those things though when he does, it's really nice. The one thing I love about Christmas and the holidays, is the pie that my mom makes. She makes the best apple pie I've ever had! We had like three for thanks giving, and not even a day later they were gone. Oh man they were so good!
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yeah...i know what cha mean...we don't really do dinner for christmas...mabe something like roast beef...or meatloaf normally...but there's alway potatoes...i love my moms potatoes...they are like restront quality...those never last too long either....ugh...so yeah...how was your day?
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It was good, I'm starting to catch a cold though. Lucky me, well, as long as I'm not sick when Christmas rolls around. Yours?
~V. Blood Rose
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craming to finish my english homework...just taking a break here...ugh...i'm dreading finals though....
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Well english homework isn't that hard, right? It could be Math, I've always had trouble in Math, so I always dread math homework.
~V. Blood Rose
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yeah your right...it's just that it was a lot of writing...i'm not that great at math either...i usually understand the main idea...but i might mess up some miner step...like i might muliply something wrong or add when i should have subtracted...negitive numbers always get me...
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Very lovely poem! It's very dramatic yet it really captures the reader! ^^
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wow 
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You're welcome and thank you, too.
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wow, elf child, amazzzzzzzzzing!!!! @ least i think so! greatness! what exactly r u talking about in ur poem. i have an inkling but i wanna know wat u were actually thinking first.
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well i don't know really i just write! i'll link you the song or something so you can see for your self.
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