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Description                  Part I
Tears going cold and seeping
I just want you to know who I am
Your face is haunting like ghost
And I don’t want the world to see me
I’m just glad to know that you’re alive.

Your breath bitter chilling and sweeping
The feeling hits my heart with a slam
Your image is lingering like spirit
I just want you to know who I am
I’m too scared to face this alone
I’m just glad to have you at my side.

Aching and tearing, you leaving
My burden weighs down to the sand
Water is fleeting like feeling
I just want you to know who I am
The edges of conscience is fading
I’m just glad to have time left to bide.

Eyes closed and heavy like sleeping
Sickly sweet taste of forgiveness
This mind left to ponder and reeling
I just want you to know who I am
I’m trying to stand still and waiting
I’m just glad the last image was you.
                   Part II
Flowers open to embrace the sunlight
Growing to beautiful to last
Your voice still haunts me like ghost
I just want you to know I love you
I’ll try to find you when I get there
Were ever you are I miss you
Sickly sweet taste left to linger
I’m just glad that you left with a smile
The blue rose I left by the window
That’s how I will always remember
When sunlight creeps through the darkness
My burden grows lighter to see
Your face is still how I left it
Smiling to meet your embrace.
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Comments: 16

daoboebuggie [2007-10-27 00:21:47 +0000 UTC]

nice poem

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candlewick In reply to daoboebuggie [2007-10-27 00:43:52 +0000 UTC]

thanx...i thought so too!

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RheaTorieSoto [2007-10-18 01:17:24 +0000 UTC]

I love that song!
Great peom Olio, I think I'ma go cry now...it's so moving! TTvTT

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candlewick In reply to RheaTorieSoto [2007-10-18 23:10:22 +0000 UTC]

awwww...don't cry and thanx! man now i have to write five for tommarow! i'm not likeing this excel. eng. program anymore...

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RheaTorieSoto In reply to candlewick [2007-10-19 00:49:14 +0000 UTC]

that's no fun...eh

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candlewick In reply to RheaTorieSoto [2007-10-19 02:10:03 +0000 UTC]

how your goin?

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RheaTorieSoto In reply to candlewick [2007-10-20 02:10:41 +0000 UTC]

I'm fine, and you?

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candlewick In reply to RheaTorieSoto [2007-10-22 01:58:08 +0000 UTC]

okay THREE DAY WEEK!!!!

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RheaTorieSoto In reply to candlewick [2007-10-23 01:13:19 +0000 UTC]

YOSH!!

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candlewick In reply to RheaTorieSoto [2007-10-23 21:04:36 +0000 UTC]

whooo hoooo!

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misplacer [2007-10-12 21:29:34 +0000 UTC]

DON'T YOU JUST ADORE THAT MOVIE?!?! <3

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candlewick In reply to misplacer [2007-10-14 01:56:08 +0000 UTC]

HOwls moving castle? heck ya!!!! i love it sooo much i found it on youtube and saved every part!!!so now i can watch it anytime, since my parents wont let us try netfilx out...howl has a sexy voice, and calcifer...well...is just calcifer...

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misplacer In reply to candlewick [2007-10-19 00:34:03 +0000 UTC]

Howl's voice is done by Christian Bale who did Batman. You NEED to see that too if you haven't already!!

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candlewick In reply to misplacer [2007-10-19 02:13:17 +0000 UTC]

i've seen it not one of my fav super hero movies but still has a sexy voice!

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misplacer In reply to candlewick [2007-10-19 21:12:48 +0000 UTC]

HELLS YES!!!

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candlewick In reply to misplacer [2007-10-20 00:17:37 +0000 UTC]

whooo hoooo!!!

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