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Callyzah — YYH Underground - 13 - Eng
Published: 2009-11-18 14:52:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 2797; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 18
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Finally the end of that part...
Now the things will be a little more dangerous!!!
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>_> Hiei tries to eat him then hes like want candy best frand? XD tipical yusuke
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lol I have images of Yusuke with a rickety van trying to lure people in with candy lol
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I love Yusuke's expression in the last panel.
Hiei you sulky baby...
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AW! It's good to see Yusuke isn't holding any hard feelings about the bite. Of course Hiei would think he's an idiot, but a lovable one...teehee..
Once more go Kuwubara for sticking up for Yusuke! That's what friends are for! This is amazing as always and I just cannot wait to see what other types of danger these four will get involved with...Also I look forward to seeing you draw the girls...you hadn't for the last comic aside from Yusuke's Mom...unless I forgot...
Anywho update once more soon!! ^_~
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yes!!! thanx!!! my line is mutant... and not always my hand does the way that I want... some times I get right, other I do wrong 
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There's some grammer issues again (I hate being the one to point them out but the really obvious ones bug me.)
1: Until I know Hiei have never tasted human blood before. Should probably be (I have no idea what you were going for so I'm going with what makes the most sense) Until then I didn't know Hiei had never tasted human blood before.
2: Be Off (technically okay, just WAAAAY outdated) could be Scram, Leave me alone, Get Away, or Go Away.
Just trying to help, sorry if I seem really anal about all this stuff. The obvious ones just bug me tons.
Great comic as always. I really love your style, never quit, and keep em coming if you will.
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hahahaha... nice!!! OK
heh... don't feel bad... I really thank the help in the grammar... because:
and when I want to say something, I write another -_-''!!!
heh... than, keep helping
and about story... it is a deduction that I thought... I don't really know if Hiei had already tried human blood before, but for that I saw in anime, it seems that not... . when Kurama impedes Hiei of killing Keiko, helping Yusuke, I think he didn't still kill before any human... and the youkais kill humans to eat them!!!
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Haha... I think google translator might help (not sure though, it gave me some weird stuff from spanish to english) if not there are grammer sites that give basics... it's much better, and sorry to keep being the one to point it out. *grins* I really love your comics, not that many people get the characters right when they do comics and such. *gives you a thumbs up and then disappears to wait for the next one*
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heh... no probs
I know the basic ... I just have a translation program, some sites of expressions, a friend that knows well and people like you that helps me!!! XDDDDDD :dancer: even so... I always mistake something, but i don't care!!!^^
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O___O Its minty fresh, Hiei! You know you want it!!!
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This great! The Mint candy thing made me laugh.
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dawww! I want to huggles Hiei x3 he is so darn cwute! <3
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