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Published: 2013-10-11 13:02:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 1618; Favourites: 127; Downloads: 10
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I chose the name of this piece "Good Times" because when I look at it I tend to remember that some of my fondest memories when I was growing up was spending times with my friends hiking, exploring, and just hanging out with friends in general. The background is fairly similar to the place that I grew up... except for the fact that I grew up in the city! XD However, the green landscape with mountains, and occasionally snow/ice covered mountains, was something that you were able to see a lot.I hope ya'll like this piece of Flutters and RD!
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Once again, great job on the detail and the background is gorgeous! Nice job making it fade into the distance. Adding dimmension is good, great job. Also, I noticed you're lighting has gotten well, lighter lol. It matches the time of day. As usual, I have to say once more that I love the texture and originality you put into your style. The colors are very nice, I just sat there and went"wow" for a second lol. You are doing great! Keep up the hard work my friend! You get full stars on this one. The idea is clearly presented, well executed, your own original style and design, and I already mentioned the impact lol.
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Good job, I really like how you did the colors and the shading, they come out as realistic and they don't blend in with the background (like what would probably happen to me). The background mountains and grass and all that reminds me of impressionist art, amazing job on that, and the mountaintops are at a little angle, making them look like they're swaying in the wind and I love that. Fluttershy and Rainbow's expressions on their faces look like they're truly having fun, RD guiding and saying "Come on!" And Flutters is like, "Rainbow Dash, I'm having fun!" all excitedly. It all adds mood to the piece, making the viewer probably smile (I sure did. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
Ears are too stretched out for my taste, I don't have a problem with adding fur to the bottom of the ears, but Rainbow's ear-fur looks a little too exaggerated. Her mane looks uneven, and the colors of the mane look like they're stacked on top of each other and you can barely tell the difference between orange and red. Fluttershy's mane looks excellent, the color and the texture, everything about her mane and tail is great, I don't need to give any criticism on that.
Okay, so another problem I have is the front legs of the two. RD's right leg looks great, but the left shoulder looks kind of like a mini flank. And the middle part of the leg connecting to the shoulder makes it seem a little double jointed. Same with Flutty's right front leg; and the way that Fluttershy's back right leg is bent makes the inside of the knee look slightly too round; you could try hiding a small portion of the leg to REALLY make it look bent.
Well, that is my critique. Overall, the piece is great, I really like it. Now I want to just get off of this computer and soar like an eagle--or a pegasus. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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CALEB!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE TEACH ME HOW TO DRAW GOD DANGIT PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Once again you have caught my eye with your stunning art^^
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I'd hate to point this out but... Fluttershys head looks like a football,oval shape
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Eh, at least you weren't being rude about it. And yeah I can see how it looks that way and get got a god feeling what I did to have done that... Scaling, great trick but really needs to be used carefully, and I'll try to get it better next time! ^^
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Yes it is quite tricky this is still a good picture btw
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Darn apple word corrector, I meant to say I got a good feeling of what I did, not a god feeling! XD
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hahaha, they act very much so! ^^
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I'm glad that artists like you agree with me here.
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Thank you so much, I'm glad to hear ya like it!
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Thank you so much, glad to hear ya like it my friend!
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Yay, I got the three best ponies approval!!
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Great job! I really look the look of the characters, but specially the background. Those meadows are just precious
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Thank you so much, I'm glad ya like it!!
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Flutters? That's a new nickname haha. Still doing good!
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Hahaha, I feel as though I've heard her name said like that somewhere before, and it just stuck... Or I came up with it and never realized it! XD Thank you, I'm glad that my art is still doin alright!! ^^
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Thank you so much, and I'll do my best!!
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