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ByoWT1125 In reply to Sweet-White-Wolf [2010-10-11 23:03:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ~ XD

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Sweet-White-Wolf In reply to ByoWT1125 [2010-10-12 17:12:52 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome! >3<

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ByoWT1125 In reply to Azuris [2010-09-01 03:07:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you glad the pose looks fine to you XD
and that background was fun to do

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ByoWT1125 In reply to FrazeyBCrazy [2010-07-31 06:47:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you XD

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ByoWT1125 In reply to WovenLife [2010-07-30 18:06:01 +0000 UTC]

XDDDDD thanks!

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ByoWT1125 In reply to Rainystormclouds [2010-07-30 03:14:41 +0000 UTC]

I can't help but giving the pic a little traditional look XP
Thank you

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Rainystormclouds In reply to ByoWT1125 [2010-07-30 17:24:43 +0000 UTC]

I can't help commenting almost every art that you've done
I just love love the colors and the details you put into every picture. Kudos.

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ByoWT1125 In reply to RamzaWolf [2010-07-30 03:17:25 +0000 UTC]

ROFL!! GLAD YOU LIKEY 8D
nooo you don't have to XD I don't know who should I ask you to draw XP just browse my gallery [link]
but really you don't have to <333

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RamzaWolf In reply to ByoWT1125 [2010-07-30 03:22:37 +0000 UTC]

heheheh
must must 8D

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ByoWT1125 In reply to fasier [2010-07-30 03:19:12 +0000 UTC]

homg you nom mah picture!
omg yes please <333 crits are more than welcome!! don't worry about negative reactions! XDDD cause I won't be!

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fasier In reply to ByoWT1125 [2010-07-30 10:22:28 +0000 UTC]

mmmm yes your picture was VERY tastey, I tasted the rainbow and it was better than SKITTLES! lol I don't like them

well the bits I find awkward is that front paw positioning. It kind of looks a little bit stiff as though leg just meets the toes without any actual paw the other paws are better but maybe still slightly stiff and flat, I cant really describe it lol its just as though they join onto the leg too early but the legs appear to be long enough (I screw up complicated poses all the time so I can't really say whether the length of the leg is okay lol) but yeah, its basically the whole how they join, the front one is probably the most noticable because there appears to be a lack of a paw, where as with the rear I think it is more of a depth between the toes and joining of the leg that would need adjusting.

Also looking back the join on the neck/back is maybe a bit too twisted lol. I like it the positioning, but I don't think that would actually be possible. You've made it so you can see the lower back, then just the side and then suddenly this head does a bizarre thing of twisting to look almost behind itself rather than to the side. This could be altered in several ways, the boring one would just to have it looking the opposite way where youd see the other side of its face the next would be again quite dull where the upper back twists round to be in line with the lower back but you'd mainly see the back of the head lol really interesting and the only other way I can think of if you started with the lower back in that position is to shift the upper so it continues going in an upwards diagnol towards the upper right and then smooths round to its current position but then of course you wouldn't get as much of the legs in view which I think really help make the picture.

But saying that I do like how it is very much lol just the head does seem a bit, well of an impossible position without the left shoulder rotating round so that you see that and with a bit of strain in the neck. ummm try it yourself I guess stand upright and try to look as far behind you as possible without moving your eyes to the side or your hips/chest, you'll find that your head can't twist round so that your nose is in line with your spine now try it again but this time keep your hips still but move your upper body (chest, abdominal muscles, shoulders, arms etc) younow find you see further "behind you" from the hips but of course from that angle more of your shoulder is in view and you still and not in line with your spine (as in your drawing) the final step would be to use your hips too in order to look behind you with this your knee should sink and your hips shift as well as your legs rotating slightly. after that the only other thing would be to move your legs to turn around so you are looking sideways the same should be similar for on all fours, head faces the shoulder, the arms then sinks as the chest moves and I'm not entirely sure if they can bring their hips into the matter too lol, generally speaking from my experience with my dogs is they will just do the look over the shoulder and then rather than getting the chest involved, just turn around lol with it

hope that helps lol

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ByoWT1125 In reply to fasier [2010-07-30 14:43:08 +0000 UTC]

homg the words~!
So the problems you can see here are the paws and the neck position, I got it XP Now you mentioned about them, I see them a little weird too. Thanks a bunch for noticing that! And I'm glad you tell me about it, I'll get a note and try to practice with this pose more ;D

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fasier In reply to ByoWT1125 [2010-07-30 20:31:54 +0000 UTC]

yeah lol I repeat myself and talk alot but thats basically it lol its okay I don't usually notice stuff to crit in general lol I didn't notice the neck till today when I was looking back! I feel mean lol

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ByoWT1125 In reply to fasier [2010-07-31 06:48:51 +0000 UTC]

nawwww don't feel mean, your comment was really useful <3333

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fasier In reply to ByoWT1125 [2010-07-31 11:08:50 +0000 UTC]

Thartss goooood then im feeling reluctant to upload my terrible anatomically incorrect wrong colour watercolour piece lol I might just be brave and go for it

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ByoWT1125 In reply to fasier [2010-08-02 06:47:39 +0000 UTC]

well you SHOULD be XD

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fasier In reply to ByoWT1125 [2010-08-02 14:39:46 +0000 UTC]

I should be a big gigantic omg can't you just feel the tension of a photographic bear pillow!!

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ByoWT1125 In reply to Moose15 [2010-07-30 03:19:19 +0000 UTC]

Thankies! 8D

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ByoWT1125 In reply to ArticWolfSpirit [2010-07-30 03:19:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you <333

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ArticWolfSpirit In reply to ByoWT1125 [2010-07-30 19:54:39 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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ByoWT1125 In reply to KitsuneWaffles-chan [2010-07-29 20:12:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! <3333

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KitsuneWaffles-chan In reply to ByoWT1125 [2010-07-29 20:16:52 +0000 UTC]

No problem! :3

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ByoWT1125 In reply to Leeomon [2010-07-29 19:32:54 +0000 UTC]

Yessss, children love colorful stuffs XD
lolol that just made no sense plz ignore
Thank you

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Leeomon In reply to ByoWT1125 [2010-07-29 19:40:13 +0000 UTC]

Fff who's the child? Ramza, me... or you? OR WE ALL?

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ByoWT1125 In reply to Leeomon [2010-07-29 19:52:28 +0000 UTC]

WELL I AM!!!! *runs away and cries*
cause I created it......
XDDD no seriously, I love colorful stuffs lol

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Leeomon In reply to ByoWT1125 [2010-07-29 20:12:34 +0000 UTC]

Lol XDD

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ByoWT1125 In reply to Leeomon [2010-07-29 20:14:37 +0000 UTC]

FEAR ME >U

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Leeomon In reply to ByoWT1125 [2010-07-29 21:08:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh, no no, I eat little children. >D

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ByoWT1125 In reply to Leeomon [2010-07-30 03:20:14 +0000 UTC]

I'll nom you, for whom have nom'ed children!!!!!

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Leeomon In reply to ByoWT1125 [2010-07-31 02:03:24 +0000 UTC]

Gaaaah, I nom you back! D<

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