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BurstChyld — Botik

Published: 2007-07-09 04:46:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 75; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description My latest creation...Botik. a Mecha comic thats just as customizable as the machines within...
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LadyNilamarthiel [2007-07-26 15:07:06 +0000 UTC]

I must say that it's quite good. Your lines are very precise. However.

The right arm and the left arm seem disproportionate to each other. Was this intentional?

Also, I think that darkening lines in the torso area would help show the right arm better. I look at it, and I cannot tell how large the arm is without pressing my nose to the screen.

Keep it up, Tori-face!

~Erin-face. XD

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BurstChyld In reply to LadyNilamarthiel [2007-07-27 14:33:15 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the insight, well...the arms are supposed to be different...but hey. I hadnt drawn in a long time before that concept sketch. I plan on putting up a more official sketch, plus a few more characters. that is if I can get a scanner i9n here.

peace!

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