LadyNilamarthiel [2007-07-26 15:07:06 +0000 UTC]
I must say that it's quite good. Your lines are very precise. However.
The right arm and the left arm seem disproportionate to each other. Was this intentional?
Also, I think that darkening lines in the torso area would help show the right arm better. I look at it, and I cannot tell how large the arm is without pressing my nose to the screen.
Keep it up, Tori-face!
~Erin-face. XD
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BurstChyld In reply to LadyNilamarthiel [2007-07-27 14:33:15 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the insight, well...the arms are supposed to be different...but hey. I hadnt drawn in a long time before that concept sketch. I plan on putting up a more official sketch, plus a few more characters. that is if I can get a scanner i9n here.
peace!
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