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Published: 2005-06-09 08:07:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 347; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 49
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Description Some design class stuff.

Constructive criticism more than welcome.
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Comments: 8

Bizowikc [2005-06-10 03:13:53 +0000 UTC]

Looks like Architectural design but at not level. I really like it though, it's powerful with just Black and white, you may want to accent with some red in some areas to add even more of a punch. Also with those top rafters, the edges start straight in the distance and then the last 5 slant... they change for some reason, but it doesn't really look right to me. Could be just me though. Good Job!

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burnthings In reply to Bizowikc [2005-06-10 04:24:33 +0000 UTC]

It was done as a class assignment, and we were only supposed to use black and white... although I could definitely add some color to it later! And yeah, the rafter things need to be changed... the way I made them, they just sorta got messed up.

Thanks for the tips!

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Bizowikc In reply to burnthings [2005-06-15 06:26:53 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome! Glad I didn't make you mad or anything!!

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onedaynight [2005-06-10 00:36:19 +0000 UTC]

to be honest with u.. it is very good

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SubmarineEst [2005-06-09 17:10:50 +0000 UTC]

cool. nice style...great work

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Tsuchan [2005-06-09 16:38:49 +0000 UTC]

lovely piece. I have no critisisms or suggestions. I was immidietly drawn to it, the composition is strong and it keeps you looking.

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oSKARt [2005-06-09 14:11:35 +0000 UTC]

wow, awesome. The perspective is brilliant

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lucky-tweak [2005-06-09 08:14:19 +0000 UTC]

awesome lovely perspective piece

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