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Description The unexpected
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               10 years ago . . . 4th of July the day of impendence. In a small town called Reynoldsburg Ohio is is setting off fireworks, having a pie eating contest and most of all relaxing and watching the fireworks. Two very good friends that have know each other for quite some some time are watching the fireworks.
"Hey Dan," said Kristina.
"Yea," replied Dan.
"You know how we got drunk last week and we did some things."  Said Kristina
Dan chuckles"Yea I remember."
Kristina looks at Dan."Well I'm pregnant and you're the father."
Dan thinks to himself "really…I've known this chick since I was 14 and that is been ……. 7 years wow . . . . . . akward." "Well Kristina guess I'm going to be a good father." Kristina looks and him and blushes, Dan puts his hands around her waist and kisses her lightly on the lips. Kristina is standing smiling hard. "Kristina hold on I'm going to get my Camera from the car." "ok." Replies Kristina. Dan runs to the car.
On the wonderful glittery night with the rockets are bursting and crackling in the sky. In the sky filled of screamers and poppers a small object appears in the sky. Kristina spots the object she squints her eyes to get a better view of it. "What is that?" she says to her self.
Dan is in the car searching for the camera "Where is the camera?"He says to him self.
A tall man in a white lab suit runs into the field "A Comet is going to hit this area any second now GO RUN GET OUT OF HERE!" yells the Man. A 385 pound, 45 year old man walks in front of him and says "What is the comet going to do destroy all?, Get Out of here psychopath." People are laughing at him. They start tossing and throwing food at him.
"Fine, but if you die it's not my fault. "Says the lab coat guy.
"Did they guy just say comet….Freak." said Dan. "Hey here's camera"
A 5 year old is on the back of a pick up truck looking through a telescope. The kid spots the comet "mommy, mommy look "say the 5 year old. The mom looks through the telescope and sees the comet. "Guys look through at the sky the guy was right." Says mom.
Everyone looks up at the sky and spots the comet. "RUN!!!!" yells the lab coat guy. Everyone starts to rush out quickly. Kristina runs near a tree a person pushes her she falls and she gets her leg stuck in a coyote trap. Dan desperately looks around for Kristina. He spots her, while running towards her direction he is squeezing through the crowd.
The comet burst through the atmosphere."I fell in a coyote trap." Moan Kristina. "Don't worry I'll help you" Dan calmly tells Kristina. He pulls down both sides of the sharp coyote trap. Kristina slowly pulls out her leg. Blood drips from Kristina leg and makes a small puddle. "you'll be ok I have you."Dan said calmly. Dan picks her up from her back and legs and starts run quickly.
The comet is burning through the sky lighting up every inch of the town. The comet is about 300ft from the ground. The comet is the size of 42 school busses balled up as one.
Dan runs behind a tree and she wraps his arms around the tree, while Kristina is between the tree and Dan. She firmly holds on to his waist.
The comet smashes in onto the onto the field. The comet shakes the ground massively; the comet creates devastating winds pushing trees back flipping over cars and destroy street lights. Rocks from the impact of the comet go flying massively every where.
Dan and Kristina barley holds onto the tree. Kristina looks up and she sees massive rocks flying through the sky, flying through trees smashing buildings, houses and cars. Kristina put her hand on the side of Dan's cheek and kisses him on the lips."Dan I love you." she groans. "Now is not the time be making love," says Dan. Dan gets a better grip while trying to fight the wind. He pulls himself to Kristina's chest and something pokes him he looks down and a sharp long rock has stabbed her right in the center of the her chest.
"Kristina,… Kristina!" yelled Dan. He looked at her in the eyes. Blood rolled out of the side of her and landed on his shoe. Dan closes his eyes and several tears run down his face…

                           


                Xavier and Katelyn's story     
Present day….. The 4th of July the day of independence. In Cincinnati Ohio people a gathering around downtown to watch the fireworks, kids are running around being playful, people are buying food and snacks and most of all people are trying to find a good spot to sit at. Two best friends are sitting down by a concrete staircase, near the Ohio River.
"Ugh what time it is …… 8:30 and they still haven't lit off any fireworks." Complained Katelyn.
"Maybe its not dark enough, I mean the sky is still dark blue." Replied Xavier
"Maybe………. But still." says Katelyn  
In the Dark blue sky lays a few stars not as much 50 but a few. People began to be less chatty. An old 59 year old man in a red shirt strikes a match and Lits the rockets. In a matter of seconds many firework starts to  swirl pop and crackle.
"It took them long enough," said Katelyn
Xavier digs in his pocket and pulls out a silver necklace that he has bought for Katelyn, he opens the center of the necklace and it is a picture of him and Katelyn hugging, it says "best friends  4 ever" imprinted below on the bottom of the picture. Xavier closes it and sticks it right back in his pocket.
The fireworks light up the sky, making Cincinnati seem orange . Katelyn opens up the palm of her hand. A thin golden necklace is in the palm of her hand. She opens up the small diamond shaped frame in the necklace it has a picture of them two back to back holding up peace signs.
"Hmmm I wonder how he would react if I gave this to him?"She says to her self.
Katelyn closes it back up and continues to watch the fire works.
"Ooooooooooohhhh Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh," The crowd says repeatedly of people while watching the fireworks.
The rockets are bursting in the air, exploding, crackling the smell of fire works starts to settle in the crowd.
"Hey Katelyn I got you something," said Xavier. Xavier scoots next to Katelyn.
"What is it," asked Katelyn
A woman spots an airplane flying towards the bridge."Plane PLANE!!!!," yelled the woman. Every body looks over and spots the flying object in flames. The men are still lighting off firework. The plane is moving at a rapid 600 miles per hour. Everyone starts to run and escape.
Xavier grabs Katelyn's hand, they rush and climb up the stone staircase they are running freely in the grass. Xavier and Katelyn hides behind a giant stone wall.
The plane spins and slams into the ground, the left wing flies off and starts bouncing uncontrollably in the grass. The wing hits the wall. The wall crumbles and several rocks fall down.
"Is it over" asked Katelyn.
Seconds later the plane explodes, sending objects and items flying in different directions. A strange 10in cylinder flies over the wall, it slowly rolls to Xavier and it taps his shoe. Xavier picks it up and looks at awkwardly. Xavier sticks it in his jacket pocket.
Minutes later people calmly start coming out from there hiding places.
"Look Xavier this looks horrible," said Katelyn
"Wow tell me about it," replied Xavier   
Everything is in destruction, people have been injured from the plane crash, Trees have been knocked over and burned up. The large grass field has been destroyed. Police and people in blue shirts come.
"People who are not injured….. Please go home" said a police officer.
"Well Katelyn I guess we haft to go," said Xavier
"Yea…… lets go," replied Katelyn
Xavier and Katelyn walked to square and caught the bus to get home. On the bus Katelyn taps Xavier's shoulder. Xavier looks at Katelyn.
"What's that?" asked Katelyn. She points to the cylinder.
"Oh it's just some thing,… that I came from the plane crash" say Xavier
"And your going to keep it?" asked Katelyn
"Ha! Might as well" said Xavier. Xavier pulls the bus cord.
"Well Katelyn looks like I'm about to leave, Hug" said Xavier
"No," replied Katelyn
"Hug," asked Xavier
"No!!!," Replied Katelyn
" Hug…" asked Xavier
"Hmmmm……….. No" says Katelyn
"Fine I will get no hug then " Xavier says
"Good," Katelyn says smiling
"Come Here" Xavier says. He wraps his arms tightly around Katelyn.
"Ok, OK Go this is your stop!" Katelyn yells
"Bye," says Katelyn
"Bye," says Xavier. Xavier walks off the bus and walks to his house in the dark. Xavier opens the door.
Xavier's mom is on the coach watching T.V. Xavier walks slowly in the house.
"Xavier are you ok?" asked Xavier's Mom
"Oh yea I'm fine" replied Xavier
" What happened ?" asked Xavier's mom
"Plane crash, I rather not talk about it," says Xavier
"Oh ok well thank god your ok," said Xavier's Mom
"Yea," Xavier replied . Xavier has a huge grin on his face. He turns and walk up stairs he gets to the top stair and yawns loudly.
"Man this has been a crazy day,"  says Xavier. Xavier walks in his room and put the cylinder on his table, and he throws his jacket on the floor, he flops on his bed and falls asleep.
NEXT DAY
The cylinder turns green in the center and starts to make a humming sound. Xavier wakes up from the disturbance from the cylinder.
" What is that sound?" Xavier moans. Xavier walks slowly over and picks up the cylinder.
"And why is this vibrating?" Xavier Asks himself. He taps the cylinder and the vibration get louder and then it returns back to normal.
"I have to tell Katelyn" says Xavier. Xavier opens up his cell phone and dales Katelyn's number.
Beep, Beep the phone goes off and wakes Katelyn up.
"Ugh, who is calling me?" said Katelyn. Katelyn looks at her phone."Xavier . . . . What does he want at 9 o'clock in the morning ?" She clicks the green button.
"Hello. . . . . what do you want,?" asked Katelyn
  "Katelyn the cylinder its acting weird, its vibrating and its glowing green and stuff, get up and go to Viridian forest I will meet you up there," said Xavier
"Ugh. . . . . . . fine" groans Katelyn
The sun in the morning is high and bright, but the heat from the sun rays still hasn't taken away the mornings fresh, grass scented air. Both Katelyn and Xavier leaves there homes to get to Viridian forest. The small brush of trees makes that forest mini.
"Man I hate this hill. . . . . this better be important or else I am going to hit Xavier so hard," said Katelyn. Katelyn finally make it to the top, and she see's Xavier sitting on a fallen tree.
"Ok show me this glowing cylinder," said Katelyn
" Ok look," says Xavier. Xavier holds out the cylinder.  Katelyn rests her index finger on the cylinder
"Wow. . . . . . . . Cool" Katelyn says sarcastically
Deer are hopping and prancing towards there way Xavier and Katelyn's way.
"Hey look deer," said Katelyn she points at the deer.
"Hmmm, well what do you know deer 1,2,3,4…..,6……8…..13 Deer," says Xavier
A buck jumps out of the bushes and pushes Xavier, Xavier tries to catch is balance but a brand trips him. The cylinder flies and hits a side a rock.

"Ugh…..,"  Xavier moans. He gets up and walks near the cylinder. But he notice that black smog is coming from the cylinder. Xavier takes a step back, the smog from the cylinder shoots up 35 ft in the sky. The smog comes down and starts swirling around Xavier and Katelyn.
"Wha-what's happening?" asked Katelyn
" I don't know!!!" Xavier yelled
The smog flies up in the sky and flies down directly aiming for  Xavier. He looks up and take a step back. The smog impacted onto the ground missing Xavier, but it hit his shadow. Xavier's shadow got pulled into the black smog.
"Xavier your shadow…" said Katelyn
A figure slowly arises from the smog. The figure looks like an exact copy of Xavier. The figure has grayish-brown skin, green sharp eyes, dark bluish-grey hair, sharp fingers that lead to a sharp tip, and several tight wrinkles.
The figure starts to chuckle, when he talks his lips do not move." MWAHAHAHAHAHA oh how ironic fate can be,… I would never have believed I would be resurrected through your shade….Thank you Xavier Morrow" says the figure He bows down to Xavier.
"His lips don't move when he talks. . . . . this is creepy," Katelyn thinks to her self.
"Umm …… Who are you and how do you know my name?" asked Xavier
The figures arms dangle from his body and his head points to the ground. The figure drags is feet while walking slowly towards Xavier.
"My name is Cyuros,  Cyuros the dark. . . . . . . . Did you forget me?" Cyuros says in a deep shady voice. Cyuros puts his hand on Xavier's shoulder. The touch from Cyuros gave Xavier chills through his whole body.
" I owe much too you Xavier," says Cyuros. Cyuros lifts one hand up. Xavier takes several steps back and bumps into Katelyn. A small blue, black and purple orb is swirling in Cyuros's hand.
"What you gave to me. I now return to you . . . . . A ONE WAY TICKET TO OBLIVION ! ! ! " Cyuros yells.
He lifts up his hand. The orb expands around Xavier and Katelyn. Xavier grabs  Katelyn's arm they all disappear…..
300 YEARS IN THE FUTURE
    
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Comments: 4

Maybell-Hx [2010-05-16 02:23:21 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting!
I wanna read more to see what happens, does the first part have something to do with the alien thingy?? Lol
there are still a couple of mistakes....If you would like I can beta for you

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bulewind64 In reply to Maybell-Hx [2010-05-16 18:06:45 +0000 UTC]

yea a little bit...

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bulewind64 In reply to Maybell-Hx [2010-05-16 13:18:43 +0000 UTC]

well thanks for reading it i going to put another on there in like in 2 days. and yes the cuple in the first part play a big role in the story. and ill take care of the mistakes haha. . . .

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Maybell-Hx In reply to bulewind64 [2010-05-16 22:08:25 +0000 UTC]

Lol the mistakes are easy to read over Haha no thing big
Cool can't wait

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