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Published: 2010-10-01 18:57:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 1002; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 6
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Description EDIT: IT WAS NOT MENT TO BE SUBMITTEN AS PRINT I JUST ACCIDENTLY DID AND I DONT KNOW HOW TO REMOVE IT!!!!

Na, na, na, na, na, na
na, na, na, na, na
na, na, na, na, na, na

Na, na, na, na, na, na
na, na, na, na, na
na, na, na, na, na, na

Grew up in a small town
And when the rain would fall down
I’d just stare out my window
Dreamin’ of what could be
And if I’d end up happy
I would pray

Trying hard to reach out
But when I tried to speak out
Felt like no one could hear me
Wanted to belong here
But something felt so wrong here
So I prayed I could breakaway



I’ll spread my wings
And I’ll learn how to fly
I’ll do what it takes
Till I touch the sky
make a wish, take a chance, make a change
And breakaway
Out of the darkness
And into the sun
But I won’t forget all the ones that I love
take a risk, take a chance, make a change
And breakaway

Na, na, na, na, na, na
na, na, na, na, na
na, na, na, na, na, na

Want to feel the warm breeze
Sleep under a palm tree
Feel the rush of the ocean
Get on board a fast train
Travel on a jet plane
Far away and breakaway



I’ll spread my wings
And I’ll learn how to fly
I’ll do what it takes
Till I touch the sky
make a wish, take a chance, make a change
And breakaway
Out of the darkness
And into the sun
But I won’t forget all the ones that I love
take a risk, take a chance, make a change
And breakaway



Buildings with a hundred floors
Swinging round revolving doors
Maybe I don’t know where they’ll take me but
Gotta keeping movin’ on movin’ on
Fly away breakaway



I’ll spread my wings
And I’ll learn how to fly
Do it's not easy to tell you Goodbye
take a risk, take a chance, make a change
And breakaway
Out of the darkness
And into the sun
But I won’t forget the place I come from
take a risk, take a chance, make a change
And breakaway

Breakaway...Breakaway..

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finally again a good pice im so proud of this one... its just actually im never proud of my pics... but this? i totally fell in love with it XD

whos the char? its me as wolf or how my school friends say... my school fursona XDD
anyways her name is reneé (spoken reni)
i was inspired by the song breakaaway by kelly clarkson

need to hurry... ~TheWolf1993 wants to see the finished version or else hes gonna kill me

done with: adobe photoshop elements 6 and MOUSE!!!!!
time: uhm... i took a many days...

art and char: ME!!!

DO NOT COPY; EDIT; REPOST OR USE IN ANY FORM WITHOUT MY PERMISSION!!!!OR ELSE ILL CUT YOUR HANDS OFF!!!
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Comments: 28

kwinzilla [2010-10-01 19:58:01 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Because you asked for it soman e.deviantart.net/emoticons/m/m… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Meow :3"/> The background is very simple. You used Photoshop brushes. But the leaves don't have shadows. Also, the clouds could be a bit more detailed. And if I were you, I would make the line that resembles the mouth a bit..errmm longer. The grass in the background and the water have no 'limit'. The grass stops at one point and whallaa there's the water O.o Also, the wolf itself doesn't have a cast shadow. The ear of the wolf could be a bit smaller, and mor pointier. Anyway, I would love to redline this one for you.

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bubblepup In reply to kwinzilla [2010-10-02 16:28:46 +0000 UTC]

hmm i accept your critique. but i think that this isnt really a critique thats useful for me (sorry) but that what you told me is more... erm *english fails >.<*
like your opinion... its my drawing style... i allways draw clouds and bgs very simple... also because im not good at detailed... and with the mouth... well its also part of my style... i allways draw the mouth that small when the char im drawing is sad or thinking about something... but thanks anyways for the critique^^

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kwinzilla In reply to bubblepup [2010-10-03 13:16:46 +0000 UTC]

lol I just said what I think that's wat critique means, right? Anyways I redlined the picture for ya.

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bubblepup In reply to kwinzilla [2010-10-03 13:21:03 +0000 UTC]

XD
okay

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kwinzilla In reply to bubblepup [2010-10-03 13:26:15 +0000 UTC]

Lol, anyway sorry for my baaadddd English. I suck at English [link] Here's the redline.

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bubblepup In reply to kwinzilla [2010-10-03 14:07:48 +0000 UTC]

haha me too XD

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kwinzilla In reply to bubblepup [2010-10-03 14:16:46 +0000 UTC]

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TheWolf1993 [2010-10-08 19:12:14 +0000 UTC]

nur eine frage wer ist jezt eig dein haupt fursona/character/oder wie auch immer du das nenst XD?

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bubblepup In reply to TheWolf1993 [2010-10-16 08:39:54 +0000 UTC]

bubble

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TheWolf1993 In reply to bubblepup [2010-10-16 18:50:54 +0000 UTC]

ok jez wes ichs

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Dark-Forest-Faerie [2010-10-05 22:29:06 +0000 UTC]

Critique

Pros:
I really like the color you used for your shadows. It really compliments the warm tones used in the character. The blurred leaves in front give a very nice sense of depth in the foreground. The lineart, for the most part, is smooth and you have a nice basic understanding of flat coloring.

Cons:
The first thing I notice in this image is it's striking resemblance to BlueShineWolf's "Moon" It could even be a complete trace, although I'm not going to check and see. It is apparent that she has been an influence in your drawing style. I reccomend to learn the rules before you break them, or learn to draw realistically first, then stylize. This would help with your anatomy, which is very much off. I have included a redline that should explain the errors in this area.
The second thing that strikes as odd is the brightly coloured purple stiped armband that the wolf is wearing. This may be fine in a picture that suits its' color scheme more, but in this soft, warm pallete, the vibrant purple sticks out like a sore thumb. This type of color theory, however, is often used to highlight important parts of illustrations, usually in the eyes. If the eyes of this character were a violent purple, it would have worked very nicely.
The third and final thing I will touch on is the overuse of Photoshop brushes. The orange sky and stylized mountains can be passed off, since this is obviously not a realistic drawing. However, the photoshop grass and the photoshop leaves look very flat and rushed. I reccomend looking at some tutorials for grass, and using some real life reference for sketching fallen leaves, rather than quickly using a brush.


Redline: [link]

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bubblepup In reply to Dark-Forest-Faerie [2010-10-16 11:18:44 +0000 UTC]

hmm thanks really much for the critique... this helps me really good.

well to the point that this looks like bsw and that..
dont you think too that its allright that nikki knows why it is like that?
i allready told her anything^^

for the anatomy. i know i have my problems with it and im glad that a few people are willing to redline this to help me^^


to the point with the purple armband.
its an armband shes allways wearing.
shes has purple eyes and thats why it is also purple^^

ok for the bg im thankful for the help^^. i know that i totally fail at bgs. but i never really thought about using tutorials... but i should practice it XD


thank you very much for the critique and the redline^^

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Dark-Forest-Faerie In reply to bubblepup [2010-10-16 13:36:18 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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suppari [2010-10-03 18:33:49 +0000 UTC]

WOAH THAT'S SO PRETTY 8D AND I LOVE THE IDEA *w*
GREAT COLOURS THERE
GREAT POSE, CHARACTER,SHADING,EXPRESSION AND COLOURS
EVERYTHING'S SO PRETTY IN THIS ONE *W*
VERY WELL DONE

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bubblepup In reply to suppari [2010-10-03 18:38:42 +0000 UTC]

AWWW THANKS SO MUCH SUVI
IM SO GLAD THAT YOU LIKE IT^^

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suppari In reply to bubblepup [2010-10-07 17:49:07 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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xxTwilightShadowsxx [2010-10-02 15:30:55 +0000 UTC]

Well i think its very pretty! =3 and Yea the ear is just a bit too big but Maybe Their chara is supposed to be that way? u never know XD and not everything has to "cast shadows" it could be a time of day when u dont have a shadow. and with the mouth, Havent you seen anime or comics? Anime style is not supposed to be too realistic. i this is perfect.

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apples-ishness [2010-10-02 07:58:54 +0000 UTC]

i love the pose

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bubblepup In reply to apples-ishness [2010-10-02 09:04:06 +0000 UTC]

thx

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olivialovesdogs [2010-10-02 03:41:10 +0000 UTC]

Amazing work. I love it.

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bubblepup In reply to olivialovesdogs [2010-10-02 09:04:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you <3

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TheWolf1993 [2010-10-01 19:02:11 +0000 UTC]

ach man wieder net erster >.< WIE IMMER >.< ARGHASICJAFOPIJ XD warum verpenn ich immer nja ja XDDD danke für die erwähnung XD erlich das ist brilliant oo besser gehts net oo na ok n wenig kritik muss ein der fluss passet mir net und dei berge sind nja n wenig scharfkantik sonst ist alles perfekto 1a ne 1++++++++ YAY wäre ich dein kusntlerer würde ich dich auf ne design oder kusnschule schicken XD

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bubblepup In reply to TheWolf1993 [2010-10-01 19:03:52 +0000 UTC]

hahaha XDD
hmm yoa jetzt wo dus sagst.. der fluss und die berge sehen echt komisch aus XD

trozdem thanks^^

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TheWolf1993 In reply to bubblepup [2010-10-01 19:05:45 +0000 UTC]

np ^^

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kwinz1996 [2010-10-01 18:59:39 +0000 UTC]

I'll give you critique on my other account ok?

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bubblepup In reply to kwinz1996 [2010-10-01 19:01:13 +0000 UTC]

okay^^

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kwinz1996 [2010-10-01 18:58:55 +0000 UTC]

TA AWESOME. THIS IS SO COOLLLL......AND YOU USED A MOUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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bubblepup In reply to kwinz1996 [2010-10-01 19:01:24 +0000 UTC]

hehe thank youuu^^ yes i did

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