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BrianTyson ā€” Goliath and Elisa 2013a by-nc-nd

Published: 2013-07-05 18:21:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1243; Favourites: 68; Downloads: 0
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Nico-Di-Angelo-fan [2013-07-05 18:28:11 +0000 UTC]

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O.k, how do I start? O.k, I really like the wings. The way you shaded them to curve that way. I also like the way that you highlited the woman's cheekbone. Her pose seems a bit forced as well as relaxed. Maybe her right arm should bea but lower perhaps? Take a look at Goliath's feet, I think they're kind of off. I like the expression on both of them. I hope this crtitique wasn't too harsh. I gave you 5 stars on your strong points and 4 on your weak points. Over all, I think it's very nice. K, rock on. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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BrianTyson In reply to Nico-Di-Angelo-fan [2013-07-05 18:30:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank You!

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Nico-Di-Angelo-fan In reply to BrianTyson [2013-07-05 18:34:17 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome Brian

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A3Kitsune [2013-07-05 22:27:48 +0000 UTC]

Nice.

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BrianTyson In reply to A3Kitsune [2013-07-05 22:34:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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