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Published: 2011-04-04 21:30:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 216; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 8
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Description This is a commission I did for a friend of my mother. These are her grandchildren: Phebe and Abby. She was so happy when I would sketch them, she was dancing.
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Graywolf923 [2011-04-05 20:58:37 +0000 UTC]

The child's eye on the left is a little off.

Otherwise, it's really good. c:

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braixlord In reply to Graywolf923 [2011-04-06 01:43:15 +0000 UTC]

which eye and how so?

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Graywolf923 In reply to braixlord [2011-04-06 02:10:33 +0000 UTC]

Um, the one on the right. It seems a little too close to the sides of the face, and too far apart from the other eye. It doesn't look quite right, rather a little off. Or maybe move over some of the features of the face to even it out.

I draw cartoons, so it might not be the best critique, but I hope it helps. :3

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