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Blytz — Fallen

Published: 2004-09-12 18:16:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 7992; Favourites: 142; Downloads: 1760
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Description I am now dry
no emotion to show
tired of this life
and taking every blow

it's taken my all
to get where I am today
and yet that's all it needd
to change my world gray

I've run out
of needle and thread
I can no longer stitch
the wounds that have bled

My heart's so complex
not JUST worries and cares
if you can't find the door
'climb in through the tears

it's taken a toll
as the years have gone by
I'm a wondering soul
who doesn't know how to fly

So will you take the challenge
to stitch up these things
will you be my Angel
and help me, be my wings
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Comments: 270

Desertlion [2008-03-03 04:50:46 +0000 UTC]

You have given us a portion of you. You have allowed us to peer into your precious mind and view something very sacred to you. The fact that you will not allow prodding or any type of analysis is only natural, but be certain that what you put forth is yours. What you take away is also yours. We as readers can only tell you an angle of what we see in your art, but you have fleshed it and form this piece. I applaud this bravery for sharing your beauty with us. Please never keep something like this from eyes who desire to see.

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kattykatty [2007-10-25 00:50:22 +0000 UTC]

This is what i am feeling right now. In every sense of the word.

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convictofjp [2006-03-12 17:34:01 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Blytz In reply to convictofjp [2006-03-13 19:37:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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squigglequeen [2006-02-28 18:42:40 +0000 UTC]

Incredible. I absolutely love this poem.

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Blytz In reply to squigglequeen [2006-03-01 22:33:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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squigglequeen In reply to Blytz [2006-03-02 04:01:56 +0000 UTC]

^-^

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MissM69 [2005-08-15 23:49:05 +0000 UTC]

beautiful poem

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Blytz In reply to MissM69 [2005-08-16 11:42:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^

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MissM69 In reply to Blytz [2005-08-16 20:22:12 +0000 UTC]

You're quite welcome

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Kaeldra-1 [2005-07-26 17:43:26 +0000 UTC]

wow that's good :-D I love it.

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Blytz In reply to Kaeldra-1 [2005-07-27 14:57:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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BrOkEn2NiTe [2005-06-14 04:24:37 +0000 UTC]

omg this is great

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Blytz In reply to BrOkEn2NiTe [2005-06-14 14:14:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

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BrOkEn2NiTe In reply to Blytz [2005-06-15 00:02:04 +0000 UTC]

no prollem

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Mysterria [2005-06-11 07:51:44 +0000 UTC]

Very good, I like it!

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Blytz In reply to Mysterria [2005-06-11 19:10:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! This poem is very old I should change my feature

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Afflict3d [2005-05-19 14:11:30 +0000 UTC]

holy crap! now this one is omg! so beautiful! i love it! really really do! your awsome!
+fav

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Blytz In reply to Afflict3d [2005-05-22 17:04:53 +0000 UTC]

Okay, seriously stop, you're making me blush. ^^

thank you for the really appreciated comment and fav.

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Afflict3d In reply to Blytz [2005-05-22 21:00:15 +0000 UTC]

no problems ^_^;

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dyingflower [2005-05-10 15:32:57 +0000 UTC]

Picture: This is the most beautiful fallen angel I have ever seen

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Angel-Soul [2005-05-07 09:11:03 +0000 UTC]

I love it! it's soo beautiful, this bit especially
"if you can't find the door
'climb in through the tears"


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Blytz In reply to Angel-Soul [2005-05-08 23:28:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it ^^

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freakAzoidchick [2005-04-16 23:40:43 +0000 UTC]

love it lots. good work. so deep. adn i love the way you worded it too.

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Blytz In reply to freakAzoidchick [2005-04-17 00:57:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much!

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freakAzoidchick In reply to Blytz [2005-04-17 22:01:17 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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Xio101 [2005-04-02 00:32:22 +0000 UTC]

hmmm.....I LIKE IT!
Very very nice.
I think I'll chek out your other work couse this is really good!

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Blytz In reply to Xio101 [2005-04-02 01:00:41 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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Xio101 In reply to Blytz [2005-04-02 01:37:16 +0000 UTC]

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Its-Only-Art [2005-03-27 22:16:18 +0000 UTC]

lovely poem

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Blytz In reply to Its-Only-Art [2005-03-27 22:56:59 +0000 UTC]

thankya

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CrimsonRazor [2005-03-15 00:44:50 +0000 UTC]

*gasps* woa oh. my. fucking. god. this is such a ver very really very VERY beautiful poem. I love it...its a fav. i just read it 20 times. its completely and totally wonderful!!!!!!!! i havent yet found a poem on deviantart that i've loved as much as i love this one...and the ones i have read are really great....but wow this one is really amazing. i want to hug you...i could kiss you...this is great. CHEERS!

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Blytz In reply to CrimsonRazor [2005-03-15 23:22:47 +0000 UTC]

You said that my poem was the best you've read, when in fact your comment was (as well) the best comment I have ever recieved. I GREATLY appreciate that. as for the hug and kiss, you'll have to wait in line with everyone else (I wish)

Really, thanks for the wonderful comment and Fave.


... did I make enough emoticons? I don't think I have used this many in one comment before!

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CrimsonRazor In reply to Blytz [2005-03-19 07:14:48 +0000 UTC]

You are very very very welcome. I really love it. I should be thanking you for sharing this. You and I have similar writing styles so that is probably why i like your poem so much. It is really great I love it. Thanks so so much! XD And thanks for all the emoticons keep me updated on your new stuff

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Blytz In reply to CrimsonRazor [2005-03-20 20:15:46 +0000 UTC]

Lol Alright. I'm thining about posting a new poem sometime this week. not sure if it is good enough though XD

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CrimsonRazor In reply to Blytz [2005-03-21 07:18:07 +0000 UTC]

Great! Cant wait to read it...send me the link when its posted...

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Blytz In reply to CrimsonRazor [2005-03-22 01:19:26 +0000 UTC]

Mmg I'm too lazzzy........ just go to my site, it's the first one.


heheh.

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mystery-muffin-man [2005-02-18 00:01:47 +0000 UTC]

Holy Cow! Your an awesome poet! I really like the 5th stanza. It's very deep

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Blytz In reply to mystery-muffin-man [2005-02-18 00:25:47 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you! I have more poetry but that would be in the VERY beginning of my deviations. I should get back into writing.

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mystery-muffin-man In reply to Blytz [2005-02-18 03:09:29 +0000 UTC]

I think you should, I mean your poem is at the council right?

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Blytz In reply to mystery-muffin-man [2005-02-18 23:32:58 +0000 UTC]

now it's in state. O_o


Thanks for encouraging me on that, I'll try to get inspired into making something good.

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mystery-muffin-man In reply to Blytz [2005-02-19 17:32:54 +0000 UTC]

I look foward to seein it. Just keep at it. When you have a gift, be sure to use it.
Rock On!

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mystery-muffin-man [2005-02-17 23:57:25 +0000 UTC]

Holy Cow! Your an awesome poet! I especially love the 5th stanza. It's very deep.

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Layia [2005-02-08 18:08:29 +0000 UTC]

this is really cool! and very nice.
the picture goes with the poem quite nicely too! ^^

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Blytz In reply to Layia [2005-02-13 20:35:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the comment.

You gottza love tha picture too, I only wish I made it. @_@

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denmanam [2005-01-24 17:44:32 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing, I love te messge, this makes my attempts at poetry look like crap!

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Blytz In reply to denmanam [2005-01-25 02:30:53 +0000 UTC]

I highly doubt that

but I greatly appreciate your comment! Most people don't comment on Fallen, they either fav it and leave or... gah. It bugs me

again thank you for the lovely comment!

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denmanam In reply to Blytz [2005-01-25 17:41:29 +0000 UTC]

youre welcome

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chambered-nautilus [2005-01-15 08:14:27 +0000 UTC]

so beautiful... a gem of a poem... i love it...

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Blytz In reply to chambered-nautilus [2005-01-15 09:20:21 +0000 UTC]

I'm very glad you liked my poem. I'm hoping to get back in the habbit of making more.

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