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Published: 2007-01-25 23:01:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 3158; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 90
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Description OMFG THIS HAS TO BE THE BEST PIC I DREW IN A WHILE!!!

Short story about the pic, Tempest hates cowards…and ESPECIALLY guys who look down upon women. This woman wanted to enter a strength contest, and the guys were insulting her and such…so Tempest took it upon herself…to… “educate them.” She has one by the throat, about to launch one with one hand, and is kneeing the third in the face. The biggest dude is scared out of his damned mind, and the lady is happy.

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Name : Tempest Ana-Maria DeLeon

Alias : Tempest, Pride.

Age : 29 in demi-jin years. (Which is 2,900 in ours)

Hair Color : Naturally Black and Silver, but since being stuck in SSJ1, Her hair is Golden with a light hint of silver...

Eye Color : Naturally orange, but now Jade Green..

Race : Demi-Jin (Devil Sayajin)

Skin Color : Caucasian yet lightly tanned.

Height : 6’ 4”

Weight : 498 lbs (is muscle / bone density)

Family : Dante (father, deceased), Catalina (mother), Diego (brother, dead), Carmen, Monica, Tatiana (sisters)

Occupation : Wanderer, Warrior.

Build : Very well muscled yet feminine, muscle VERY dense..

Personality : Tempest is a woman with a big big heart. She loves freedom, she loves fighting, training, anything that can keep her occupied. Shes very smart although she wont say she is. It takes on helluva lot to get her angry or annoyed, but there are things that can get her to that point quickly. Cowards who ask for a fight and run, men who have little to no respect for women, and people calling her by her middle name. SHE HATES IT.

Danger Level : Tempest is possibly one of the top 5 dangerous people in my DB end of the Blackverse, and probably in the top 10 most dangerous of the Whole Blackverse. With unbelievable stamina, strength that puts Carmen‘s to shame, wit, and mastery in several different art forms, make Tempest a completely different ballgame than others. And with her ki at the point that she cant lower it past SSJ1 explains how much her training has done for her. And with many more years in her, she will defiantly make you think twice of challenging her. Ranking her at N/A.

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Being the eldest child…means you set the bar, and you set the example. Tempest Ana-Maria DeLeon was born to Dante and Catalina DeLeon nearly 3 millenia ago. She was born with more than an unnatural aura which had Dante and Catalina worried. But after they took her home, and noticed how quickly she was able to do things, it clicked. Their first child was a prodigy. Holding Tempest in high regard, Catalina threw so many hopes on the child which varied from taking over the family businesses, to getting married. As Diego, and Carmen were born though, things were beginning to sour between Catalina and Tempest. Tempest began to try other things, like fighting, drawing, and other things. She was already a devastating fighter, and she was only 14, and she had achieved Super Sayajin 3. But a turning point was coming, something she didn’t see coming. Her mother denounced fighting, and told her, if she ever tried to fight without her consent…she would kill her with her bare hands. The now extremely well built 15 Tempest, who had great power, a lot of knowledge, and many other things, had come at a pass. She was becoming fed up with her mothers views, and said she was sick and tired of how she did things. If she was concerned, she would not allow Catalina to push her around anymore. Hence the night before, her little sister Carmen watching her as she talked to her father Dante. Carmen was young, but had no idea what she spoke of. She asked her father if leaving would be the better, smarter thing to do. Dante smiled at her and replied, “You are probably the strongest being our family has seen since the days of Wrath, Pride, and Greed heading the family. I know whatever choice you make…you’ll be fine.”

With those words said, she slipped out of the house before the morning arrived… Catalina freaking out because of her star child she tried to mold escaped for freedom. She tried doing the same with Diego and Carmen, but apparently her plans would never work. As Tempest traveled, she learned many techniques, gained much more strength and power. She truly was shaping into a true powerhouse. And before long, she reached SSJ 4. But this also came at a price. She was 21 at the time…and had heard of Diego’s passing. But she noticed something….she couldn’t transform back to normal sayajin…she was stuck in SSJ 1. When she saw many masters and asked them what the problem was, they told her it was very simple. She had an abundance of power, and that this was as low as she could possibly go now. Not distraught, and actually very glad about this and like usual made the most out of this recent adversity. Although she usually didn’t hold back in battle, she was forced to learn how to, due to her now half god like abilities. She had kept in contact with Carmen… and time was going by fast…she had become exponentially stronger to the point she doesn’t even know where her ki level lied. She was now 29, and a powerhouse with little cares in her mind, until she met a woman who was destroying things recklessly with her light sabers and fighting techniques. This woman’s name was Aliana. Tempest at first was very easy on her…and used as little power as she needed for it. But Aliana was enraged, and came at Tempest with all she had. Tempest knowing a warriors rage when being looked down upon then decided to end the battle then and there, almost wiping Aliana off the face of the planet with one ki blast. As she left her there, she said to Aliana, “If you dare try this again…I know your ki signature…and Ill find you…and Ill break you.” She turned and walked away.

Thinking she was basically moved on, Tempest continued her travels and actually got to meet Carmen again when Aliana’s plot was about to come to total fruition. Before a killing blow was stuck on the force master, Tank, Tempest said she would do exactly what she did. Out of nowhere she speared, and struck Aliana with a vengeance, beating her into submission, forcing her to quit her onslaught. As she laid eyes on her sister, she felt pride, seeing how strong she had become, and how great she looked. As they caught up on old times, Carmen believed it was time for Tempest to see her family…for the first time in 1,500 years. Tatiana was totally in shock and awe, on how this sibling was…but didn’t argue much, she got Tati out of trouble constantly in her short visit. Monica was in awe as they sparred…although Monica was taken out in 3 minutes because Tempest dragged it out, it was some of the most fun Monica ever had. And with Carmen, the sisters decided their time together was going to be the best time of their lives. Although this lasted about 4 weeks, Carmen and her family had to say goodbye to Tempest, as Tempest decided to planet hop again… but as she continued to get stronger again, she noticed something about the mark on her neck. It was the mark of the Demon god Pride, meaning she was the incarnation. She froze as she also had remembered that Carmen had the symbol of Wrath on her back at birth, although it doesn’t show now. Feeling like she must conquer her dark side…and be there for Carmen when Carmen’s dark side unleashes… she returns to Earth to stay…for that faithful battle.

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YAYYY! ^_^

The DeLeon Family, Aliana Matsumoto, and basically everything explained. © *BlackKusanagi
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Comments: 50

Blauque [2009-12-29 02:57:26 +0000 UTC]

Goddamn that's a tight ass grip she has around that poor bastard's throat. If it were me, I'd be a bit happy on the inside,lmfao okay enough of that, this pic is really cool. I don't see many people drawing their female ocs interacting in a fight like this while enjoying it at the same time. Tempest is a hottie, and I'd never treat a woman like that like crap. I'd worship the ground she walked on, but then I'd be a stalker if I did so,lol

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freeza-frost [2007-02-12 05:34:20 +0000 UTC]

was wondering. who're the girl n guy in back? do they have a relationship with her? family, lovers, etc?

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BlackKusanagi In reply to freeza-frost [2007-02-12 05:36:30 +0000 UTC]

All explained in the description.

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freeza-frost In reply to BlackKusanagi [2007-02-12 19:19:29 +0000 UTC]

i read the desc and i'm not sure. tould be carmen n diego or maybe tank and aliana or even her parents dante and catalina! help me!

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BlackKusanagi In reply to freeza-frost [2007-02-12 20:39:33 +0000 UTC]

What arent you sure of?

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freeza-frost In reply to BlackKusanagi [2007-02-13 02:15:45 +0000 UTC]

not sure where the desc mentions that guy n girl.

might be her parents!

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BlackKusanagi In reply to freeza-frost [2007-02-13 05:22:25 +0000 UTC]

Nah. The guys were bothering the girl since the girl wanted to lift also. SO when they were about to Jump her, Tempest stepped in.

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freeza-frost In reply to BlackKusanagi [2007-02-13 21:53:06 +0000 UTC]

okie. so they're all just random people. hope the shocked guy doesn't get hurt. unless that's the girl's boy.

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freeza-frost In reply to BlackKusanagi [2007-02-12 19:12:50 +0000 UTC]

okie. ~_~

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My-God-Issa-Girl [2007-02-11 03:55:59 +0000 UTC]

lmao she looks so innocent while killing 3 ppl >.>

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BlackKusanagi In reply to My-God-Issa-Girl [2007-02-11 06:15:51 +0000 UTC]

Tempest takes pride in butt whippin. ^^

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LavenderBlade [2007-01-31 21:09:30 +0000 UTC]

So powerful!

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BlackKusanagi In reply to LavenderBlade [2007-02-01 02:28:29 +0000 UTC]

Duh.

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DK2K1 [2007-01-30 02:17:04 +0000 UTC]

She's havin' fun. :d

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DK2K1 In reply to DK2K1 [2007-01-30 02:17:37 +0000 UTC]

Wrong emoticon.



There we go.

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Red-Lamia [2007-01-28 08:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done man. Keep it up!

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BlackKusanagi In reply to Red-Lamia [2007-01-29 02:41:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. ^_^

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Kagira [2007-01-27 15:51:56 +0000 UTC]

Since I hate to fave without commenting...here's a comment!

Nah, seriously you know I love this. The reasons? Great pose, excellent anatomy, awesome expression (she's enjoying it waaaay too much XD), wonderful character design, and your usual fantastic bio.
Think that covers it.
'Tis fantabulous.

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BlackKusanagi In reply to Kagira [2007-01-28 06:04:47 +0000 UTC]

Hehe

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KirbySnacks [2007-01-26 22:36:38 +0000 UTC]

Awesome pic!

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BlackKusanagi In reply to KirbySnacks [2007-01-26 23:30:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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freeza-frost [2007-01-26 13:38:52 +0000 UTC]

cute!

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BlackKusanagi In reply to freeza-frost [2007-01-26 13:55:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^_^

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freeza-frost In reply to BlackKusanagi [2007-01-26 13:57:28 +0000 UTC]

welkies bk!

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Wolfscar [2007-01-26 13:20:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow really cool!!

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BlackKusanagi In reply to Wolfscar [2007-01-26 13:23:18 +0000 UTC]

Thnx.

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Wolfscar In reply to BlackKusanagi [2007-01-26 13:24:21 +0000 UTC]

Haha no prob

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VegetaNoOuji [2007-01-26 10:20:35 +0000 UTC]

Cool. Nice pose ;D

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BlackKusanagi In reply to VegetaNoOuji [2007-01-26 13:18:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^_^

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VegetaNoOuji In reply to BlackKusanagi [2007-01-26 22:30:39 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome :]

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2007-01-26 06:35:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh uhm... well, ehehehehe... Here's my opinion about Tempest:
She's one hot babe! I like her smile. It just makes me wanna stare at her, lol. On the side note, she looks like she's having a bit too much fun torturing those guys by swinging them around,

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tj-caris [2007-01-26 05:31:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that did come out very well. Nice work

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BlackKusanagi In reply to tj-caris [2007-01-26 05:40:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^_^

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MikazukiArt [2007-01-26 02:16:49 +0000 UTC]

This is like the awesomest awesome thing ever. My comment won't do it justice, but I'm gonna give it a shot anyway.

The artwork is simply the best Black Art I've seen. The arms are so well shaped, and the abs are to die for. Seriously, I'm jealous of those abs. *drooools* This, ladies and gentleman, is my favourite build. Next time someone asks what kind of FM build I like, I shall point them this way.

The composition seems a bit cluttered in the sense that everyone seems to be at a similar depth (mm, for example, the ones at the background don't seem far away enough, the 2 guys in her hands seem like they are directly to her left & right, instead of say, the one she's holding up could appear a bit closer to the viewer while the one with the grabbed neck could be a bit further away). This is a bit advanced crit, but maybe something you can look into, now that you've mastered character forms. The activity of the composition, however, is great. There's enough going on in the pic to keep me drooling and chuckling and go "Ow! That's gotta hurt.. *choke* *spaz*" all at the same time. This lady has a lot of spunk and power. Oooooh, and how she relishes it. :LOVE:

Her personality has pretty much everything I hope for in a character. To list a "big big heart" first thing, that means a lot to me; it's something I don't often see, perhaps because this quality is not much valued by the public at large, more often seen as a weakness than a strength. She's over-the-top talented, yet modest; another thing I don't often see, as the trend nowadays seems to be for people with overinflated ego's. She has a solid sense of fairness, respect, and standing up for others - always a plus in my books. And her fun and easygoing-ness completes the cake for me.

The story is also something that touches a chord with me, perhaps because I am also an eldest child with much younger siblings. The responsibility to set an example, the longing for freedom, a sense for adventure and rebelliousness, and not quite being a part of the family, but loving the family dearly... I can muchly relate to.

Her background story takes me back to those wandering heroes of old, the ones with no name but always a place in people's hearts. I also enjoy that bit of history about legendary figures and events... and the hint of a reincarnation of those events are just sooooo tantalising... Dangit! I just hope I won't have to wait demi-jin years to read about it.

All in all, thank you very much for this entry. Tempest has surely stolen my heart.

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BlackKusanagi In reply to MikazukiArt [2007-01-26 02:26:37 +0000 UTC]

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EleneK [2007-01-26 01:33:40 +0000 UTC]

This picture kicks ass. I really like her form and the looke of total glee on her face

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BlackKusanagi In reply to EleneK [2007-01-26 01:41:55 +0000 UTC]

Imagine what Garikk will think when he meets her.

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EleneK In reply to BlackKusanagi [2007-01-26 03:20:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm already afraid since she now thinks he eats babies.

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BlackKusanagi In reply to EleneK [2007-01-26 03:30:39 +0000 UTC]

Lmfao, aaahh you saw Shiraga's comment

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EleneK In reply to BlackKusanagi [2007-01-26 04:08:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes, and had to respond OOC to the thread.

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BlackKusanagi In reply to EleneK [2007-01-26 05:10:03 +0000 UTC]

Saw it. Cracked me up. lol.

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VivaLaGorilla [2007-01-26 01:28:22 +0000 UTC]

Holy shit and scrambled eggs, she's kicking ass and to hell with taking names. Fantastic job on this action packed pin up BK, got to show her some favlove.

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BlackKusanagi In reply to VivaLaGorilla [2007-01-26 02:07:23 +0000 UTC]

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RebeccaBrogden [2007-01-26 01:22:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow! I like how she is tossing them around like that The expressions are priceless!

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BlackKusanagi In reply to RebeccaBrogden [2007-01-26 02:08:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^_^

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videl-bideru-devil [2007-01-26 00:28:09 +0000 UTC]

Ooh this is so awesome! <3 I love her happy expression and shes a very cool charrie! ^^ You did wonderful on dis, yes indeed! Show 'em who's boss Tempest!

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BlackKusanagi In reply to videl-bideru-devil [2007-01-26 00:28:42 +0000 UTC]

Sannkuuu.

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bahamutknightzero [2007-01-25 23:52:01 +0000 UTC]

That is one very good looking pic. She looks hot and I like her expression.

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BlackKusanagi In reply to bahamutknightzero [2007-01-25 23:54:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Atalanta83 [2007-01-25 23:47:58 +0000 UTC]

hottie!!!

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