IIINoodlesIII [2018-03-19 01:17:47 +0000 UTC]
The color pallet you choose looks good. If the main source of light its the shinning hand the nose wont cast a shadow, if you want to add volume in that zone you can do it with a color value between the shadow and the light. There should be a shadow under the arm.
In general for the style of the illustration everything its pretty good, you can improve it by looking for references of clothes, folds, maybe even rain.
Good luck!
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