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Published: 2012-03-18 19:44:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 44; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description He constantly searched for something better

No matter who or what he was that day

Didn't matter that we were together

Or  how tempting the sweet spring grass could sway.


If he could sprint well, he'd wish he could fly

And when he flew well, he'd learn how to swim

Here for now, gone in the blink of an eye

While I was content just to lie with him.


He denied himself all simple pleasures

In favor of a more efficient life

To make me happy he'd take all measures

Yet I knew I would never be his wife.


Always in a hurry; never on time,

I knew he would never truly be mine.

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Comments: 7

randomphilosopher [2012-03-23 08:08:07 +0000 UTC]

I like your imagery here.

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bitybaby45 In reply to randomphilosopher [2012-03-24 17:18:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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JuurianChi [2012-03-19 01:05:35 +0000 UTC]

Somehow, I think of myself when I read this.
So of course.
I favorite it!

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bitybaby45 In reply to JuurianChi [2012-03-20 02:36:16 +0000 UTC]

Nice. thanks!

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victorofhell99 [2012-03-18 20:03:44 +0000 UTC]

this beat the crap out of my sonnet thanks TT_TT well moving on i love it LOVE IT

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bitybaby45 In reply to victorofhell99 [2012-03-18 20:05:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks I guess I liked your sonnet a lot more than I liked mine, though!

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victorofhell99 In reply to bitybaby45 [2012-03-18 20:25:27 +0000 UTC]

nah your's is better mine was done by an amateure you have expirience here

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