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bitybaby45 — I know why.
Published: 2011-10-07 01:17:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 119; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description With the cynicism and bitterness
Came the sickly sweet breath
Of realization.

Somewhere softly a butterfly sang
And all through the dandelion petals it rang
Like the fiery gates themselves were ajar.

Somewhere droned the heart wrenching tune
Hoping for the muted starlight of June
Instead, it danced through stinging frost and silence.

Anywhere searched the sweet melody
For peace and light and harmony
Yet it collapsed into callused, clammy hands by mistake.

Everywhere went the rasping poison hold
And the tender hymn was suffocated in the cold
It carried on as a simple whisper in the resonating opacity.

Here arose a solicitous soul
Radiating his warmth through the merciless cold;
He carried the melody to safety.

He carried the melody home.
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Comments: 8

imdead123 [2011-10-15 08:37:32 +0000 UTC]

it was beautiful

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bitybaby45 In reply to imdead123 [2011-10-15 17:04:00 +0000 UTC]

thanks i was thinking about showing it to mrs. ross. should i?

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imdead123 In reply to bitybaby45 [2011-10-15 17:28:04 +0000 UTC]

YES!!!!
Its way better than anything i can write

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bitybaby45 In reply to imdead123 [2011-10-15 17:46:09 +0000 UTC]

nah. you still need to finish your book btw but alright, I'll show it to her.

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imdead123 In reply to bitybaby45 [2011-10-15 21:07:28 +0000 UTC]

o god ive only done like 2 more pages

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bitybaby45 In reply to imdead123 [2011-10-16 17:49:33 +0000 UTC]

so? it's still good. books don't finish themselves right away, it takes time.

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imdead123 In reply to bitybaby45 [2011-10-22 15:31:00 +0000 UTC]

ok. ill edit it and than post it so its not all messed up and people can understand it.

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victorofhell99 [2011-10-07 02:04:12 +0000 UTC]

how nice i demand more of this poetry woman

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