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Biscake — ...Or I'll Make You
Published: 2011-03-07 04:27:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 565; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 1
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^^ I love how this came out! xb and I liked makeing Hollyleaf's eyes all glowy x3... not really nessasary, but it looks neat I think x3Anywho, this is just the sceen where Hollyleaf trys to feed Leafpool the deathberries.
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Since I can't write a critique properly, I'm writing one here.
Biscuit has captured the main details of the cats, their fur, eyes and other important detail. Since looking at the other artwork that she has done, there has been a massive improvement. I love Hollyleaf's expression and the fact that she is urging Leafpool (Whom I hate) to eat those berries. The scenery looks quite plain and blank, but it gives the drawing a whole feel to it. With the tail on Hollyleaf, though, there are a few little parts where you haven't rubbed out. Its just those little black lines seperated. Unless that was meant to be there.. 
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^^ Thanks for the critique!
And yea, normaly I would have erased thos lines but didnt due to lazyness x3.
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Nice job Rachel! i love how the shading and textures turned out! cool!
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KILL WITH FIRE. This is her worst picture yet!!!!!! D:<
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Nice Job rachel! i love how the shading and textures turned out
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