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Published: 2018-01-29 21:43:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 329; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description Minutes too quickly, unable to mentally double check for any mistakes, Alys screamed as the magic coursed through her body, and began to burst through her skin, her clothes, her coat, around her shoulder blades.
Rainbows danced across her vision as they also danced across her back; she felt her skin stretching, nerves firing and the rawness of new bones, new muscle, new skin and something already trying to escape it, even before her temporary body parts were fully formed.

At this stage she could allow the magic to follow her designs without so much mental input, which was lucky because Alys needed all the concentration she could gather to fight the pain her magical efforts raged across her body.
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Comments: 7

akizz [2018-01-31 07:48:46 +0000 UTC]

I love those fx! Alys is a tough girl to withstand the pain.

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Belleverse In reply to akizz [2018-01-31 17:41:01 +0000 UTC]

Magically tough!

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Nathanomir [2018-01-30 01:59:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow. I'm digging catching up on your characters. She's fantastic!

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Belleverse In reply to Nathanomir [2018-01-30 02:12:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
She's no Aura, but I suspect they'd get along.

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FDComics [2018-01-30 01:54:24 +0000 UTC]

The effect of the magical wings looks fantastic
And you can tell it's taking a lot of effort on her part

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Belleverse In reply to FDComics [2018-01-30 02:11:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

I toyed with the wings 'pre-solid form'/in transition for longer than I care to admit before slapping this shader on going 'duh, why didn't I think of this before...'
And, yes, I really wanted to outline the risk and foolishness of what she just did on the fly! I'm a firm believer that certain magics should 'cost' something, and transformation should be risky, cost something, and feel, really rather intimate!

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FDComics In reply to Belleverse [2018-01-30 02:18:26 +0000 UTC]

Great idea. It makes sense that there would be some kind of heavy downsides to certain magics, or any old Tom, Dick and Harry would be able to do it

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