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desbest [2020-10-27 22:06:17 +0000 UTC]

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theJfluffy [2020-05-20 04:13:03 +0000 UTC]

Amazing job!

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kavya1208 [2020-05-18 02:25:42 +0000 UTC]

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Charlene-Art [2020-05-17 11:58:04 +0000 UTC]

This is gorgeously painted! I like all the delicate shades of blue and pink in this. However, what I think the piece may be lacking is contrast. It lacks contrast in terms of lacking sharp edges to contrast against all your soft ones. For example, usually speaking the eyes would have the sharpest detail so the viewer's attention goes there. However here the eyes look a bit blurry. The crystal's edge could also be sharp to grab the viewer's attention in contrast to the rest of the picture.

There is also a bit of a lack of contrast in colour - no outstanding highlights or shadows to make it pop. For example I think the hair could do with some brighter sharper highlights on the left hand side to bring out its shiny smooth texture. Some darker shadows in the hair would make it pop too.

I do love the delicate colours and textures of the crystal - that was really well done. In general most of your anatomy looks pretty good too! The hands look pretty good - I just think they could use a bit of darker shadow to define the places and the shape of them a bit more. But overall, this piece is really well done.

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OrangeTreebih [2020-05-16 23:25:43 +0000 UTC]

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RiEile [2020-05-15 15:34:35 +0000 UTC]

Hello from ProjectComment

This piece immediately caught my eye with well-composed blocks of contrasting colors: the skin, the hair and the background are balanced.

I like how you play with hues on her skin: there are warm peachy tones, cool blues and purples along with pinks - very well done! The only suggestion I have about the color scheme is that I would like to see more neutrals and color notes on her hair: some cool browns would play well with her skin and eyebrow color.
The white of the eye has a nice local color, it is not too bright as beginners often do, but I feel that a bit of the shadow cast by eyelid would make the eyes even more life-like.
While I like your work with the color, the edges need more attention. Almost all edges on the picture are soft to some extent. Soft edges are great to create a dreamy atmosphere, but too much of them make the drawing dull and soapy. I would suggest adding some harder edges near the focal point: on the crystal, on her fingers where there are bends (one good candidate is the light on the proximal phalanx of her right middle finger). On the other hand, the individual hairs look too hard and wiry: in reality hairs are much thinner, so it's better to be cautious with them. I like how you handled the hairs behind her left shoulder (our right) and on the top right part of the picture, but the dark wire on her forehead does not look much hair-like.

I especially would like to compliment that you did not fall into the trap of drawing the fingernails in detail, but just hinted at them with highlights, it creates a nice sketchy and painterly impression.

I guess, I'm done nit-picking it has been a great pleasure to see this piece and comment on it. Keep it up!

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Abracatastic-Art [2020-05-15 02:34:50 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely gorgeous!

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Ghostly-ToonZ [2020-05-15 01:16:43 +0000 UTC]

Pretty!

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