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Bee-R — My soul begins to listen to what is real
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#dream #xky #bright #candycane #christmaspresent #colorful #cute #grass #happy #kawaii #mails #surreal #trees
Published: 2015-01-01 09:40:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 410; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 6
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And yet..Late Christmas gift for my dear XkY
, character belongs to them
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Hello, I found this piece in the chat today, and I would like to share my opinion with this piece.
First of all, I love your color scheme. Your use of bright colors really give this piece a cute look. Of course, your characters do look cute too! I also love how you use simple patterns in the tree leaves to give it some bit of variety, and the triangles in the girl's eyes add some bit of unique character to her.
There are few things I do have to address in terms of improvement. First of all, the way the girl is holding the bunny seems a bit off. I'm assuming she's trying to hug the bunny to her cheek (in which case she should have her elbows bent. Also, you could maybe give some of the envelopes some bit of variety. You could have them flow like leaves and either give it a curve or have them face up a bit as they are drifting towards the sky. Otherwise, they look like they are pasted there.
Overall, this piece screams cuteness! Have a nice day!
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Firstly, thank you so much for taking the time to write such a constructive critique, it's much appreciated!
My idea behind this drawing was to make something colorful, cute and cheerful, something to make people happy and especially my friend XkY! Actually,I never mention it but I only draw with the pen tool and never had brushes/textures so the little patterns were hand-drawn, I just play with opacity! (:
To be truly honest...I don't know what they're doing with the cat (Yes yes, it's supposed to be a little cat), I don't know weither they're hugging it, holding it to make it higher or whatever: but I totally agree that the pose look a bit weird xD I have lots of improvements in terms of poses! And I didn't think of it this way, thank you so much for the advices! I'll try to do better next time, thank you! (:
I'm happy that you still find it cute, thanks again for this critique <3 Have a wonderful day!!
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I have stared at this for 5 min because each detail is lovely HELP SOS
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