barrierlife In reply to DarcKnyt [2010-06-19 19:33:10 +0000 UTC]
No, I really have been quiet for a "LOOOOONNG" time. I haven't been writing much in the way of prose, so I haven't had much to post. I've written a poem or two in that time, but I don't know if I want to post them before I perform them (I usually tweak them a lot more after I get a live-audience reaction). Mostly, I've been working on my two screenplays, which I'm naturally much more nervous about sharing online than prose. So, again, I've been quiet.
And, you might be right about it being too complex. Contrary to what you might believe, I'm probably the worst judge--I was reading Dragonlance when I was eight, XD!!
In defense of my (*cough*) work, though, the idea I had to spur this along was that it wasn't so much for children to read themselves (though, I'd love it if they did), but as kind of a fairy-tale / bedtime story deal, for parents to read to their children. I figured kids would have a slightly broader attention span for something they could sit back and listen to (while they look at the pretty pictures), and that I could get away with being slightly more verbose than usual? The more "classical" books of fairy tales, bedtime stories, and such, that I remember from my childhood were written in this style.
Point of reference: I had a huge old dusty hardcover collection of (de-cannibal-ized) Grimm fairy tales when I was a young'un. That's the memory I was drawing on...for what it's worth.
And you pegged it right on, I was aiming at (six-to-) eight-year-olds--being about the youngest that kids read books for themselves, and the oldest that kids let their parents read them bedtime stories, it looked like a fertile middle ground. Though, after your comment (it makes a lot of sense), I might have to buck up and aim for the 9-12 bracket. I'll go off and ponder this.
Thanks! (and it's good to back!)
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slavemama2010 In reply to barrierlife [2010-07-06 22:28:24 +0000 UTC]
It's a great beginning! And as far as target age goes... someone extraordinarily wise once said "Write the story as it wants to be told. Worry about the target age when you're done."
I think this has the makings of a great YA fantasy. (ages 10-14, they read the kinds of things you did when you were eight.) The good news is, that means you can have a longer story, with the kind of detail you are good at
xx
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