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Published: 2017-04-29 10:20:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 1230; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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Yeah, it took me all this timeno im just working on another model that made me have to learn some other skills
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I'm back again xd. Did ya miss me?(Maybe not lol).
As always it's a pleasure to see new models from you but this one has little imperfections that kinda mess it up.
Vision- First off, I like the textures. They may not look like YingYangYo's, or whatever his name is, textures but they still look nice, better than my own at least. Freddy's face seems very flat where it's not suppose to be for example at the front. It looks like someone just pushed his soft face in and left it that way. Speaking of soft, his body looks like it's made out of rubber. It kinda reminds me of those rubber stress balls and looks like it'd deflate if I were to poke it. Please fix that.
Originality- Withered freddy v5000000. Highly original.
Technique- Good lighting and textures are the main things I look for in this. I also like the eye textures. IDK if it's just me but I remember his pupils being less vibrant and more of a dull sky blue color.
Impact- I'm very sorry about what happened to your PC but I think it's good to show how quickly you were able to bounce back from something that'd make other modelers quit all together. Not to mention how accurate this model looks for someone who had to restart from the beginning.
I hope this was another good critique and I'm actually starting to enjoy critiquing your work. Your models never fail to impress me and for this one it's only a couple errors I noticed that I think you should work on. Also if I were you, I'd upload my models to a private link to download them from, just in case your laptop resets again. That's what I do with important files and it seems to work for me just fine. I'd hate to see you have to restart again so maybe take that small bit of advice e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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HOLY SHISH FINALLY
A FREDDY MODEL THAT DOESN'T HAVE SHARP AF TEETH
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oh yeah forgot to tell you this
the thing that looks kinda weird with this model is its textures
dont actually get sad at me becauseeeeee im gonna buy a new computer in a week.
and that means. M O R E C A L L S
oh and the thing is. the textures are so, tidy? what im trying to say here is that, you know, scott's textures are way too complicated. but you add textures in a bit more, professional and hard way? ugh i talked too much. look bae
the bumpmap needs to be wwaaaaayyyyy bigger its so small that it gives us a realistic animatronic look. (which isnt scott's way)
the secondary colour looks way too... orange? same goes to your regular Freddy model.
your colours are way too bright, they need to look dead (not sure if that's how i say it)
W.Freddy's main colour, you know. brown. its textures needs to be more, old? like you see those rustish parts on Freddy's suit, yeah? they need to be more black.
AAAAAAHHH IM SO BAD AT DOING THIS
WHATEVER YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN
at least i hope so.
ur cool
: )
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this was a month ago and i updated everything bae
but thanks!
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Something about the head looks off to me, it's probably the lack of textures though.
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Oh, I didn't look close enough. Something seems off though.
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