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CursedMoonlight [2010-06-21 16:58:22 +0000 UTC]
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You set on critiques, and... I couldn't resist x3
Let's get started, shall we?
First, the positives! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Red"/>Your character design is gorgeous as always. The colors look really good on her: and I love that dress!
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Red"/>Her anatomy is nicely executed. Her arms look the right length, same with her legs. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="20" height="20" alt="" title="Clap"/>
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Red"/>Your scenery, although a bit on the simple side, works really well with the character. It gives depth, and I really like that. (I wish I was better at backgrounds....)
Now, some negatives. :/
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Black"/>Her shoes look a little out of place with the shading and lineart. They just... really stand out. I'd suggest shading them differently to get them to fit in better.
I don't see anything else that stands out to me.
All in all, you've done a great job, and such a cute character, too! Keep it up e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart"/>
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Babbling-Magician In reply to CursedMoonlight [2010-06-21 18:22:22 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I noticed that too...that's why I went back and fixed it up a bit...you can take a look and tell me if it's any better or not.
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ClickJackZIP [2010-06-22 10:36:27 +0000 UTC]
wooowww those effects on her wings are beautifull done o.o
she looks sad poor thing TT^TT
anyway i rly love the whole picture :3
awsome worki ^^
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ShadowGuardian95 [2010-06-22 03:50:53 +0000 UTC]
Ohhh, nice job on the wings
They're all shiny
and the dress is adorable too <3
But who doesn't love an old school vampire?
I still need to draw Escabar anywayz, curses XD
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Babbling-Magician In reply to ShadowGuardian95 [2010-06-22 14:55:17 +0000 UTC]
I imagine Escabar would find out about her vampirism by witnessing her with her wings one night.
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ShadowGuardian95 In reply to Babbling-Magician [2010-06-24 03:41:46 +0000 UTC]
Yup... and Escabar would keep staring for a moment until he finally asks her what was up with her wings
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ShadowGuardian95 In reply to Babbling-Magician [2010-06-25 03:28:38 +0000 UTC]
Escabar would then tilt his head, confused and mutter "The ones that were just there"
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Babbling-Magician In reply to ShadowGuardian95 [2010-06-25 17:16:39 +0000 UTC]
And Laila would be pretending that she doesn't know what he's talking about, trying to get away without suspicion.
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Babbling-Magician In reply to ShadowGuardian95 [2010-06-26 12:39:18 +0000 UTC]
and at some point Escabar would then demand her to tell him, since he is the prince....and Laila would have no choice but to tell him. (since it would be before they become close friends)
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SSX-fan [2010-06-21 16:33:41 +0000 UTC]
cool
ricky: hmmm a n other vampire..interesting....what happens when you go nn the sun any way?
yea what happens when shesa ijn teh sun ois it the classic vampire thing or is it somethign different like this *pushes tricky inot the sun and it looks like he is on fire
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