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AzizlaSwiftwind — Charsheet - Sulf Onye

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Description For the contest!
And 1st plase ^_^ ---> [link]

For those, who do not have free time to read all information --- this charlist presents the character's special ability: his body is able to divide into parts and each part turns into a fish - legs, tail and so on.

Name: Sulf Onye
Race: Sprint
Gender: Male
Age: ~ 18
Status: No information
World: Defiten

Some words about the race:
Sprints were one of the first races appeared on the Defiten. Long ago they used to be slaves of another ancient race – mermaids, so sprints lived under water. However, they learned to breathe the air of the atmosphere, came to the dry land and destroyed their slaveholders.
Nobody knows how sprints are born. Males and females live separately from each other, they don’t form complete families.
Sprints are very open-hearted and loyal, they are respected by all Defiten races. They have rich culture and are masters of performing music on the flute.

Brief character’s biography:
Sulf’s hometown is Ankunat, the second capital of Nivmaryn. Aged 8, he discovered the strange ability of his body, it could divide into several parts, each one of them turned into a fish. Sulf’s ‘family’ treated him well, but they tried not to let him leave home. As a cheerful and communicative person, Sulf suffered from that very much.
But one day (when he was 14) Sulf received a note, which said, that the powerful mage, called himself Master Ray, recruit people of different races with unusual abilities to a school that was set up on one of the islands in the Sea of Silonel. The school was called ‘Eye in the Sky’. Sulf was very excited and he wanted to enter it, no matter how.
His journey was hard and dangerous, especially for a young boy, who had never seen far lands and different races. But after a while he finally reached his destination – exhausted and dirty, but with a gleam in his eyes and ready for studies. The best period of Sulf’s life has started.
He made new friends, who had various unusual talents, worked hard on tough trainings, accepted exciting challenges. Under the guidance of Master Ray students took part in tournaments, travelled through different countries and helped people, who needed their help.
It continued for two years, until the Scilla’s War happened. The ‘Eye in the Sky’ fought bravely in battles, but it was the end of school’s existence. A great part of students died in the final battle, and Master Ray was persuaded to leave the remaining youngs. Rurto Scratow, the best Ray’s student, proposed to separate and continue helping people, protecting innocent as long as it was possible. Sulf was against the separation, but the other students agreed with Rurto.
Their plan failed - a month later the Last Defiten Skinning started, when Dead Red Witch called Wire Wing destroyed about one-third of their world’s population.
Sulf disappeared without a trace during that time.
Where is he now? Is he alive or dead? Maybe he has been taken from the Defiten by one of the Integracia’s Oracles? I do not know :{

Thank you for your attention
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Comments: 18

Saviroosje [2012-04-10 13:59:13 +0000 UTC]

awhh I really like his skincolour! very beautyful!

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creyk [2012-04-10 13:24:13 +0000 UTC]

Totally looks like my old teacher!!! Just a little...bluer

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AzizlaSwiftwind In reply to creyk [2012-04-10 13:44:44 +0000 UTC]

XDDD

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PanicRawr [2012-04-06 15:08:53 +0000 UTC]

Really nice concept. but the hand fish is a bit freaky! XDD

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Kekcapa [2012-02-25 12:46:23 +0000 UTC]

Interesting character!

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Aquaria-Moon [2012-01-21 09:03:54 +0000 UTC]

I apologize for having forgotten tocomment on this ;v;
But this is..Really an amazing and original concept! I love how you can see what fish represents what part of the body while they still look like real fish!
Amazing ovo
And of course, congradulations! You TOTALLY deserved to win ^^

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AzizlaSwiftwind In reply to Aquaria-Moon [2012-01-21 09:07:02 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you very much for that comment! I thought your work will win...

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Aquaria-Moon In reply to AzizlaSwiftwind [2012-01-21 09:11:45 +0000 UTC]

To be quite honest I already expected yours to, your design is way more original not to mention way smoother. Such lovely colours too ;v;
You're really welcome, but truly, don't be modest, you really deserved the first place!

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AzizlaSwiftwind In reply to Aquaria-Moon [2012-01-21 09:18:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much *___*

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Aquaria-Moon In reply to AzizlaSwiftwind [2012-01-23 11:11:27 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome ^^

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LaLunatique [2012-01-18 23:38:28 +0000 UTC]

Very creative and following the theme closely. This one caught my eye right away for its originality and for the whole concept. The Tail-fish is ubber cute!

Originality: First time I've seen such a concept. The fishes, each of them being a body part of the character, was cleverly thought and interesting. The theme was followed nicely and effectively.

Design: The design is simple yet impactful. I will remember that character for a long time. The color pallet is catchy, refreshing... it remembers our eyes the water theme very well. The coral color and teal were very good choices, the dark blue adding depth. The pose shows very well the attitude (good nature and welcoming) of the character and even better, we can see him in action! I wonder what kind of music he plays. A very simple background yet powerful. It let the main subject being the main subject xD

Skills: The perspective is interesting and was a good choice. Each of the fishes are believable and the proportions of the character are well done.

Bonus: Nice overall composition for the character sheet! I like the fact you've introduced the race before the character in the description. Very interesting and it's easier to understand his personality. ;___; I hope we will find Sulf soon enough. Very nice backstory and heartbreaking xD I can imagine a very epic fight here.

Question: What kind of music he plays?

What can you improve: For the art, the only thing I could say is maybe playing a little more with the lighting. I think you did very well on every aspect the judges had to note.

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critic done by and

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AzizlaSwiftwind In reply to LaLunatique [2012-01-19 07:54:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for this criric!
Answer for your question: I think, some melodies from sprints folklore, that will be the easiest answer. But you see, his Master is one of the best drummers in the universe, and he plays in a rock-band, so...he could share some melodies from other worlds with Sulf.

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LaLunatique In reply to AzizlaSwiftwind [2012-01-19 15:34:36 +0000 UTC]

I see That's interesting. thank you for answering!

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Minos-23 [2011-12-17 14:38:42 +0000 UTC]

Тени хорошие, и блики тоже нравятся)

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AzizlaSwiftwind In reply to Minos-23 [2011-12-17 14:44:31 +0000 UTC]

Спс

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ArikarinUp [2011-12-17 13:50:38 +0000 UTC]

Арт классный....но больше всего нравится красная рыбка ^^

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AzizlaSwiftwind In reply to ArikarinUp [2011-12-17 14:08:12 +0000 UTC]

Хехех) Она почему-то всем нравится

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ArikarinUp In reply to AzizlaSwiftwind [2011-12-17 17:07:56 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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