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Published: 2013-05-01 12:20:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 853; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 1
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DARE I POST MY NUZLOCKE WITHOUT COLOR?ANSWER: refer to above picture.
Explaination(excuse xD) for not coloring
Well, first of all it's not a really important page, and coloring would take another day
Second, I'm a grade 11 student(high school) in your language and I'm fully aware that it's summer holiday, BUT NOT FOR ME! Me and my friends still have to learn for 5 hours a day, almost everyday, and this is the so called holiday. Weclome to Myanmar :ASIANS:
I don't really know how I'll manage my comic when school opens but I certainly won't drop or stop this. I'll just not add color
Anyway, the next page will come soon(i hope)
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i love how you draw purlion
and school is stupid :s
i decided to do shorter pages caus i did not color in the first page x3
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Thank you!
Yeah, it really is.
And I checked out your nuzlocke, it's really good, your art is quite nice too!
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no problem!
ah, thanks! that means a lot
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Nice page, really good sketching!
The only bad thing is that sometimes the bubbles are in wrong places.
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Really? Ah... I'd better do something about those soon, but I don't really know what to do XD
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Hiya, just caught up with the new page! I know what mapsal means with the text bubbles, and I may be able to suggest something that'd help.
When placing dialogue bubbles where more than one person is talking in the same panel, make sure that the first thing said is always above the other dialogue bubbles, and the last thing said is always below the others. They don't have to be directly above/below eachother, just enough so that one is higher from the bottom of the panel than the others. Comics read from top-to-bottom, so following the same pattern with the speech bubbles keeps people from mixing up the order in which things were said. Am I making sense?
Anyway, hooray on the victorious update! 
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Thanks for the suggestion, I have a whole lot of problems with those bubbles, and I think it's been for two pages at least. And yes, you make perfect sense
Yep! (Although I skipped the first two fights ..XD)
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You're welcome, glad I could help. ^^
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Did you artwork improve or does it just look extremely different when not coloured?
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Maybe it just looks different because it's not colored, my art didn't improve much, it's just that I'm bad at coloring so they look drastically different when not colored. XD but I prolly should practice coloring..
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Well just keep going, I'm not much of a drawer (as in I can't draw, like wtf) but I can certainly write. However I took years to get good, or at least to my current standard. I hear from lots of the top artists you get better as you go along and find your own style, and I'm sure you will too...
So yeah, just keep going.
A little word of advice though could be your positioning of speech bubbles, sometimes they cover important parts of the picture, perhaps better panel layout. I hope you don't mind. I'm just trying to help.
Have a nice day
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Well, everyone has their own strengths and weaknesses, if I may, I would say that your literate skill(or whatever it is called) is like heaven and hell if compared to mine.
Yep,I won't stop until I drop XD
Really? Maybe I should change the bubbles, and do you mean I should get better panel layout or it has improved? XD
I don't mind, it helps, really!
Why thank you.
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Why thank you, I have been writing for so many years... so I expect to be! D: lol.
Well my point was that you should probably work on your panel layout. I also recommend practicing battles, some can end with just one attack instead of showing an off-screen tackle/scratch-fest.
I also hope the entire plot has been planned or I can imagine you tripping up (As would ANYONE mind you, I am not exception, which is why I've planned the entirety of my plot). Perhaps working on facial expressions and body poses would be good as well. I'm not saying your art is bad, but it could get much better. I do see that you use a manga style, so perhaps try and find some inspiration from there, just make sure you avoid same-face.
Same-face is where the characters without hair, colour or clothes look the same, it needs variety.
Just a few tips, I'm not a drawer BUT I can still see room for improvement and I'm happy to help when I can.
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Your skill is evident on your work!
Hmm.... Yeah, I think I'll try to change it in the next page.
About the battles, I actually have ideas for battles with higher tier attacks, although the problem lies in drawing them out from my mind, I can't really see them vividly so I end up with crappier alternatives(I draw with visualize--> draw it out)
I HAVE planned it out(ie.refer to the title), but I only done it on a sketch level(drawing term dunno how you guys call it) so I end up putting in teeny tiny changes here and there.
Yeah, the expressions could use a hell lot of improvement, and you got the fact spot-on about the body poses, they are STILL out of proportion. I am quite aware of the same face problem, some girls in my class draw, and all i see is the same face with different hair, clothes. So I'm trying to make a little bit of changes here and there, I do hope you can see the difference between rafael and ben likewise with cheryl and N-na(Anna).
Thanks a lot for the tips, they are REALLY appreciated because I'm also aiming for art improvement , us artists have the problem of "I improved! And I overlooked a ton of problems" and I hope you will help me in the future.
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