DrewHopper [2009-07-15 14:47:10 +0000 UTC]
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I really like your idea for this shot, very nicely thought out indeed and I think the texture in it is fantastic. I really like the colour as well, very well suits the scene.A few things that I find distracting are the branch that's out of focus, you could have tried to get that in focus or even get rid of it to balance the image more. I notice you didn't obviously shoot this with a tripod cause the frame is titled which is rather annoying because simple shots like this need to be executed perfectly in my opinion. That's about all I see that needs improving!Just work more on the execution rather than the technique, I think is best to do.
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awsmdragonqueen In reply to DrewHopper [2009-07-15 16:16:30 +0000 UTC]
I also hate how the window isn't centered vertically! And i couldn't agree more with the branch. Thank you for taking the time to write a critique!
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KalanaWaliyadda [2020-05-02 06:02:48 +0000 UTC]
SAVALISTE [2012-01-11 16:48:02 +0000 UTC]
I've featured this deviation here [link]
SpaceSamuraiKelsey [2008-02-12 03:27:28 +0000 UTC]
I love this too
awsmdragonqueen In reply to SpaceSamuraiKelsey [2008-02-12 23:07:06 +0000 UTC]
thank you Kels ^^
SpaceSamuraiKelsey In reply to awsmdragonqueen [2008-02-18 06:44:28 +0000 UTC]
you're very welcome