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Published: 2008-02-10 22:19:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 868; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 59
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Description a window of the abandoned house 204.
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Comments: 7

DrewHopper [2009-07-15 14:47:10 +0000 UTC]

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I really like your idea for this shot, very nicely thought out indeed and I think the texture in it is fantastic. I really like the colour as well, very well suits the scene.

A few things that I find distracting are the branch that's out of focus, you could have tried to get that in focus or even get rid of it to balance the image more. I notice you didn't obviously shoot this with a tripod cause the frame is titled which is rather annoying because simple shots like this need to be executed perfectly in my opinion. That's about all I see that needs improving!

Just work more on the execution rather than the technique, I think is best to do.

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awsmdragonqueen In reply to DrewHopper [2009-07-15 16:16:30 +0000 UTC]

I also hate how the window isn't centered vertically! And i couldn't agree more with the branch.

Thank you for taking the time to write a critique!

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KalanaWaliyadda [2020-05-02 06:02:48 +0000 UTC]

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SAVALISTE [2012-01-11 16:48:02 +0000 UTC]

I've featured this deviation here [link]

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SpaceSamuraiKelsey [2008-02-12 03:27:28 +0000 UTC]

I love this too

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awsmdragonqueen In reply to SpaceSamuraiKelsey [2008-02-12 23:07:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you Kels ^^

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SpaceSamuraiKelsey In reply to awsmdragonqueen [2008-02-18 06:44:28 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome

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