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Published: 2013-06-07 16:55:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 4607; Favourites: 67; Downloads: 102
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Description This is an early version of my Ark knight that is mentioned in my game mythology, I will be doing another version once I get feedback.

OK so hear is the rundown, this is heavy power armor that has 2 pilots, one pilot controls the Armor via mind control, the other pilot meditates and creates the power that the Armor runes of (I will go into more depth on how this works at a later date).

I know there isn't much to go on in this pic for feedback but I will be happy to hear any ideas or concerns you may have thanks in advance.

WIP of his nemeses
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Comments: 14

GraySharkStudios [2013-06-09 17:46:28 +0000 UTC]

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Originality

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Impact


Vision: I think overall a good idea! As far as I can tell you have captured what you set out too. There is not a ton going on and its not overly fancy, but you achieved the goal of presenting the mecha efficiently.

Originality: I gave you full stars here, simply because the idea seems so creative to me. I have seen a lot of mecha related shows and stories, and though there are some piloted by focus, there are few powered by TWO pilots. Using a single person as a power source and another as the actual pilot is unique. A great concept that I believe you could tap more potential from. (Perhaps using multiple meditating humans for larger mecha?)

Technique: 3.5 simply because its a straight forward painting, not a whole lot going on in the effects or background (however a simplish background is probably preferable) The chrome looking armor is done well enough to achieve the effect I think. The view on the right of the focused power is awfully interesting.

Impact: Nicely done overall. I didnt just throw things with excitement, but its a well designed piece and enjoyable to look at. Not a whole lot of detail elements, I think your stats could be extended to show more information but overall, a well done piece sir! Good job. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="390" title=" (Smile)"/>

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MinstrelCrusadar [2013-06-10 14:40:10 +0000 UTC]

Cool concept, I sorta had a dream with something like this in it. :3 But, still epic!

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JayZeroSnake [2013-06-09 04:22:56 +0000 UTC]

Now there's a mech you don't see that often. Awesome work on the interior!

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Avitus12 In reply to JayZeroSnake [2013-06-09 04:26:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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blademaster96 [2013-06-08 05:36:57 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting design and as Heretic pointed out, those shoulder pads give it a certain warhammerish look.
Though I wonder where would those 2 people fit and how powerful would that meditating human must be.
Overall, very interesting and exceptional work. Keep it up.

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Avitus12 In reply to blademaster96 [2013-06-08 06:37:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

I will have a Schismatic view up soon, so you can see how the 2 pilots fit.
The power that the meditating pilot can produce is almost unlimited, cos they act like a gate way to another realm, it is not a true physical realm but more a place of pure power that the mediators body can feed from when meditating, in fact "meditation" is not really the right word its more just focusing.

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blademaster96 In reply to Avitus12 [2013-06-08 16:14:14 +0000 UTC]

I understand now,very nice concept.
I look forward to that schematic.

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TheHawk343 [2013-06-08 02:13:57 +0000 UTC]

Looks Great! Great concept, and great work!

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Avitus12 In reply to TheHawk343 [2013-06-08 03:23:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man

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Heretic1311 [2013-06-07 17:51:07 +0000 UTC]

ThatΒ΄s a wonderfully unique mecha.
For a second, itΒ΄s monoeye remembered me of the Zeon mobile suits from the Gundam series, but non of them had such flowing lines in itΒ΄s armor.
The huge shoulder armor gives a slight Warhammer 40k vibe, but the whole thing looks too smooth for WH.

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Avitus12 In reply to Heretic1311 [2013-06-08 01:36:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm a fan of a lot of different Armor designs

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Heretic1311 In reply to Avitus12 [2013-06-08 08:47:28 +0000 UTC]

Me too. Yours included

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Avitus12 In reply to Heretic1311 [2013-06-08 10:00:42 +0000 UTC]

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keshin-hitman [2013-06-07 17:29:25 +0000 UTC]

nice job

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