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Published: 2018-02-10 08:24:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 7366; Favourites: 352; Downloads: 183
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Another ember attempt. Still experimenting with proportions and anatomy.Hope everyone enjoys, Feel free to share thoughts and ideas/critique. Thanks for viewing
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Here I go,
On the topic of proportions, as futile as that is because show proportions are really bizarre. Her scepter in the show is kinda towering over her, should be at least close to as tall as she is. Distance between shoulders and elbows is a tad too big, if you are going for more anthro-y look, they should not reach the hips and in the show this section of her arms is really short. I am going to just mention her thighs because while having her super stacked is not taking away from the picture, they are angled inwards which makes it look like she is standing cross-legged and it just feels a bit awkward (might be intentional look since closing off her stance makes her look more hesitant/uncertain so this part might be totally irrelevant).
Perspective. The highlights in the middle of the scepter also form sort of a straight line, which messes it up a little. Back of her left claw seems to extend a lil bit too far which even in perspective makes it look big in comparison to her right claw.
Nitpicks. The point on her right shoulder seems to be lower than on her left, but this kind of disparity is hardly noticeable and yes I do take into account the perspective. Base of her wings has a clear difference between left and right, right is a sharp angle and left is rather soft. You can barely see it until you flip the picture horizontally, but her tail and left horn seem a little bit disconnected from her when you do.
I am not an artist or an art critic by any means so all this may have little merit past "hey I have noticed that..". It's a solid piece and I like it a lot. You made me stop and comment on it so I hope you continue your great work.
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Thank you for your constructive feedback! This means incredibly alot.
With anatomy, I've been trying to develop a process for learning proportions and anatomy correctly.
You'd probably see in alot of my works alot of my anatomy is all over the place. I'm still trying to figure out how to study and learn anatomy properly.
So this will help me add on and build with dragon's/ember's anatomy in the future. Thank you for all this input.
I've mostly recently just been studying lighting and form and trying to build characters volume and lighting.
Thanks for this.
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Aww my Waifu looks so adorabibbles x3 she looks concerned about her scepter tho hehe ^^
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This is stunning work! Just beautiful work.
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Cool Ember, I like the style using lot soft curves instead how she is normally draw having more sharp ones.
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