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Published: 2010-10-05 18:26:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 998; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Yeah, Talin and Maby fighting
This have been many days under the colouring process. I'm really happy about how it came out Btw, they are best friends, they got drunk and ended up in a fight
And Talin is a bit stronger than Maby, so he's on the "top" 
I can tell you they ended up getting best friends again after this fight
Oh and the blue thing in Talin's right hand is an ice-knife-something
I failed at drawing it.. But he's trying to kill Maby with it Talin belongs to the lovely ~a-little-one
Nevians belongs to ~bloody-hell-emo and ~koduko
Maby and Peptines belongs to me.
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As always it's a pleasure to see your work in coloured pencil. The colours both look alive but also really nice and clean.
I like the whole interaction thing going on. It's generally a lot more exiting to see two or more characters interact with each others, than it is to see pin-ups. That said, the picture could use a background, as an interaction like this doesn't really seem to belong in a white limbo.
You can see that the characters are fighting, but you probably could have made it even clearer, by exaggerating some of the "movements". If Talin had held the knife away from his body, it would be easier to make it out instantly. And seeing how Maby is pushing Talin away with one of his legs, he probably would twist his body, to put even more weight on the leg.
One thing that bothers me a little on the picture, is Maby's left foot. I know they are moving around, but I still think that he naturally would place the "palm" of the foot on the ground, trying to use that as well to get a physical advantage.
Also, exactly how are Talin holding on to that knife? Are there some kind of magic involved? My logical thought about weapons would be, that you'd constantly make sure to have a firm grip on it, so your opponents won't knock it out of your hand or take it from you.
A thing I really like is how you make the shadows on the characters stop, before they reach the edge of the character. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Tak Rikke 
Det med kniven, det ved jeg ikke, det er nok gået lidt galt, alt gik galt med den
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Der var også en grund til at jeg spurgte om det var magi. Man kan aldrig helt vide med væsner med overnaturlige evner.
Is er faktisk slet ikke blåt. Jeg tror det er der dit problem reelt set er. Is er delvist gennemsigtigt, og delvist hvidt, og kan have et blåt skær, men grundfarven på is bør nok snarere være hvid.
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OKay hehe tak
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Mens vi er ved emnet. Det hvide i is er faktisk luftbobler. "Perfekt is" har ingen luftbobler, og er derfor helt gennemsigtigt (opfører sig næsten som glas).
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yeah you failed colouring the ice like ice.. it looks like a diamond.. xD
but i think it's really nice... but wow i could come up with some things that i think kinda miss on it... it's not that I really want to be irritating by "critisize" (kritisere xD) your drawing down to the point that you would hate it, couse i'm really fond of this drawing... it's giving the feeling, that they fight even in the colour but I need more warmth xD dunno why x3
oh i just noticed xD talins toes looks funny... hehe and I really don't remember them to be green... but maybe rikke want them to be green? uhm I don't know..... i've never coloured them green xD
But the colouring is really neat it's really really good... and wasn't it just nice that both Talin and maby is White x'D a loot faster to colour, (I think)
wooow i give longer comments when i'm in school xD omg funny
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I know
With warmth, what do you mean? o.o
I asked Rikke to make them green, because I wanted them to be green
I don't think so, and you know why TwT' I actually hate colouring white
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heheheh dooh but a help cooould be that you colour it more light.. ^^
more warm colours xD red, and so oon xD
aah okay.... heeh
hahah I really don't know but it takes shorter time 8D
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Oh I understand
Red? But but D: ...
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naaw TwT
hehe yeeah you know warm colour... eeh
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Giv mig dit talent, Ray! Farverne er bare fantastiske og deres poses (specielt Talin's! *_*) er så veludførte!
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Njuuuh tusind tak Anne mus
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ikke for at være irreterende bare hjælpsom xD eehm er talins overkrop ikke bare en smule for lang eller er det bare mig der ser forkert?? eller måske min computer der er spasser xD
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Jo, det kan du have ret i
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hehe jaa nemlig.. men jeg langde først mæske til det fordi hende der kommenterede at talins pose var herre nice noget xD hehe
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It's absolutely lovely! :3 It's easy to see that you really made and effort coloring this
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Thank you
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Jeg sys stadig at talin er i bøssefarver x'D !!!!!
Talin: Jeg vil ikke dræbe Maby! D: *hik*
Elsker den såå meget! D: Den er jeg nødt til at stjæle! Og så spiser jeg den! owo og prutter med papirpulver
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BLAAAH
Maby: Så lad være? DwD' *Ser bange på iskniven*
Og du må ikke stjæle den
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Narj Lisbeth har tegnet ham i grøn
Talin: *smider iskniven væk og krammer ham* jeg vil ikke være uvenner!
Jo jeg mås
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Nånå :E
Haha og sådan endte den slåskamp
Maby: O3o' V-var du ikke sur?? *Ser lidt overrasket ud, men krammer bare igen*
PRUT
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Talin: Jeg ved ikke hvorfor vi slås det var Louise der fik os til det! *overfalder Louise med Maby* 8D *dræbe*
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Louise: Neeej! D: Så kan jeg ikke tegne jer jo!! Argh >w< Eller RPG'e og styre Maby :E
Maby:
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Talin: *stopper* okay du slipper denne gang
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No, but it very quickly COULD be
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And everybody loves me for it
Which is why you need to be a perv, too!
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Tsk, deny it all you want, in your heart you are a Pervy McPervy Perv
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Hvor er den awesome Ray!! Jeg elsker farverne *3*
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