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AstralMelodia — Hellfire: The Origin of Queen Chrysalis

Published: 2013-01-04 22:35:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 74884; Favourites: 1739; Downloads: 2228
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Description The comic has been dubbed!
www.youtube.com/watch?v=0wEl9D…

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Thanks for the 1,000 faves guys!
This is now my most favorited, viewed, and commented deviation! You're all awesome

Phew. Done. I just want to let you guys know that for the past month, this is what I have been working on. To be honest, I think it was worth it. This was actually a project I had to kind of one-up my previous In the Dark of the Night picture from a while back, which was my first MLP related picture ever. This is also my first time vectoring entire ponies... the body, armor, hair, everything. So I realized I needed another Chrysalis picture, because I feel she deserves it and that's where this idea came from. So ever since then, I've been essentially busting my ass over this. The majority of these panels took several hours to do, mostly due to the vectoring, but yeah. I hope you enjoy this treat from me, guys! It was awesome to do, but I really need a nice, long break now.

Enjoy!

Not bad for my first pony comic, I say.

Edit: Had to flip a panel of Chrysalis because it was inverted. Should be fixed now!

Credits
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Hellfire from the Hunchback of Notre Dame www.youtube.com/watch?v=gqGL9B…


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Comments: 422

AimForrest [2024-01-25 16:15:43 +0000 UTC]

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mathemusic [2013-01-06 23:52:57 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Vision - I don't know whether this was intentional or not, but I really liked the irony. One of the key features of My Little Pony: Friendship is magic is that good beats evil using love. This comic, however, shows that evil sometimes wins using love and the terrible things done in the name of love. Queen Chrysalis began and ended with love.

Originality - This was a spin-off of a movie so it's not totally original. But, ever since "A Canterlot Wedding" was released; I have seen no comic or fan-fiction explain Chrysalis's origins.

I have also never seen a spin-off of "Hunchback of the Notre Dame"; though, I've never seen that either so how would I know?

People have been trying to justify Chrysalis's invasion with: "She was just trying to do the best thing for her people" But no-one ever thought that she got into that situation by doing the best thing for her people.

Technique - It is very easy to imagine this being an actual episode - art-style wise anyway. There are some brilliant parallels "A Canterlot Wedding": wide eyes opening in the sixth-to-last panel; the crown falling in the panel after that.

Text was used perfectly: nothing important was covered up; it wasn't over-used; the dialogue was exactly what would be said if it were in an episode.

Impact - I don't read very many serious comics because I get depressed afterwards. But this changed my attitude. I'm going to be reading a lot more serious comics because I have just been shown how great they can be.

Overall - Lovely comic and I can't wait to see more!

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AstralMelodia In reply to mathemusic [2013-01-07 03:25:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critique! I agree that originality is the weakest point of this, which was said in the other critique as well. But I agree with what you have said. Thank you!

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mathemusic In reply to AstralMelodia [2013-01-07 10:23:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the feedback! It was my first critique and it's good to know that it wasn't too bad.

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Thejboy88 [2013-01-05 09:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


When it comes to the quality of the artwork, I have made it known many times that I give great credit to those who are able to make their art emulate the style and feel of the original source material. And this comic certainly does that as, through the use of vectors, the art style and images seem like something the show’s artists themselves might produce. However, the artist has made it clear that this comic is in fact a compilation of many separate images produced by several other artists, and as such they cannot receive all of the credit for it. Having said that though the imagery is still impressive and certainly not bad to look at, so at the very least it’s a goo-looking comic.

In addition to that, there is also the point that this comic is based on a pre-existing work, that being the Disney adaptation of “The hunchback of Notre Dame”. This, being one of my favourite films, obviously means I’m going to be somewhat biased. However, I do like this comic as it manages to successfully capture the feel of both the dark ton of the story as well as the dramatic imagery of the “Hellfire” song in particular. Overall, I’d say it’s very in-keeping with the feel of the source material.

Originality though is an area where the comic suffers. Like I said, this comic was based on a pre-existing work. And not only that, but the work it was based on was itself an adaptation of a story made by someone else. So it’s, in effect, an adaptation of an adaptation. But even if that wasn’t the case, I wouldn’t even be able to clam that it’s the first time I’ve seen this concept added to something MLP-related as I’ve seen this scenario of “Hellfire” played out with MLP characters by other artists. But, just because something’s been done before doesn’t mean it’s not good on it’s own merits, and this comic is certainly good in spite of all that.

All-in-all I’d say that this is a very good comic. While the art and story are not the best I’ve seen, it’s certainly a very good comic and you can tell that a lot of effort went into making it. It’s a worthy entry from the artist and more-than-worthy of being seen and appreciated by many.

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AstralMelodia In reply to Thejboy88 [2013-01-07 03:24:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critique! There is a lot of what you say with what I agree with. Very unbiased, which is exactly what I was hoping for. Thank you

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Thejboy88 In reply to AstralMelodia [2013-01-07 08:24:33 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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frostgirl2001 [2017-07-02 17:47:30 +0000 UTC]

Dang!

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Pony-boutique [2016-06-02 20:37:18 +0000 UTC]

oh wow, the feels

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Godzilla278 In reply to Pony-boutique [2019-12-22 04:00:49 +0000 UTC]

Super power shifting lie power

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Godzilla278 In reply to Pony-boutique [2019-12-22 03:59:49 +0000 UTC]

Xenopony is born

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princesselisa2003 [2016-04-04 21:58:00 +0000 UTC]

I couldn't resist myself I had to make a plushie of princess papillon

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AstralMelodia In reply to princesselisa2003 [2016-04-05 15:37:19 +0000 UTC]

She's too cute for this world

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Derpyfan99 [2015-11-08 08:07:45 +0000 UTC]

wow. Just... wow

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sondash300 [2015-10-16 04:12:43 +0000 UTC]

i love mlp, but i literally find it everywhere no matter what i look for now. it surprises me sometimes what it can be found in now

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The-Commissionist In reply to sondash300 [2017-02-06 01:24:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah well so does Undertale

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sondash300 In reply to The-Commissionist [2017-02-06 14:54:01 +0000 UTC]

Good. Undertale is good as well. At least for me.

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The-Commissionist In reply to sondash300 [2017-02-06 14:54:21 +0000 UTC]

Ok...

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AstralMelodia In reply to sondash300 [2015-10-16 23:07:00 +0000 UTC]

It really has reached into a lot of venues, hasn't it? Crazy to think of

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jardape [2015-05-06 05:27:07 +0000 UTC]

And now we know Chrysalis was born from a tree.

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snowsong2003 [2015-01-12 12:51:27 +0000 UTC]

so sad!!!!!

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Mayamermaid [2014-11-09 15:44:34 +0000 UTC]

i stil dont get it ...

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Rustyx3x [2014-11-02 01:30:52 +0000 UTC]

why are all the orringens of queen so sad??

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AstralMelodia In reply to Rustyx3x [2014-11-03 18:43:46 +0000 UTC]

Because of the FEELS

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The-Commissionist In reply to AstralMelodia [2017-02-06 01:24:46 +0000 UTC]

:')

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niaoswan [2014-09-29 20:26:17 +0000 UTC]

I've been looking for this for two years!!!!!!! Amazing work!

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AstralMelodia In reply to niaoswan [2014-09-29 22:14:30 +0000 UTC]

Your search is over :3

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niaoswan In reply to AstralMelodia [2014-09-30 20:21:16 +0000 UTC]

YAY!

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WinterDominus [2014-09-29 18:35:25 +0000 UTC]

Quite interesting and also sorrowful to see how my dear Chrysalis reacted to Her majestic transformation. Also I'd rather believe that She'd come from the Crystal Empire than Ponyville. Very nice arts though.

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AstralMelodia In reply to WinterDominus [2014-09-29 22:14:54 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you appreciate it though

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WinterDominus In reply to AstralMelodia [2014-09-29 22:16:58 +0000 UTC]

It must have been a lot of work, plus Chrysalis looks as gorgeous as always in Her majestic form. ^^
You're most welcome! 

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AstralMelodia In reply to WinterDominus [2014-09-29 22:36:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm just doing my job to share art with others, thank you very much

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WinterDominus In reply to AstralMelodia [2014-09-30 07:35:58 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure

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Peppy2250 [2014-09-01 22:59:51 +0000 UTC]

 

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AngrySoundwave300 [2014-08-07 06:24:01 +0000 UTC]

There's so much awesomeness int his. An origins comic for chrysalis is one thing but tying in the Hell Fire song makes it even better. It's a very interesting and possible idea that this could be how it happened. I've read one fanfiction where it explains that Chrysalis was created by Luna but Celestia got rid of Chrysalis because her very being was draining Luna, and getting rid of Chrysalis was wht turned Luna against Celestia and made Chrysalis into the dark Queen of the changelings. It was a good story but I think your comic right here is much more believable. GREAT JOB

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princesselisa2003 In reply to AngrySoundwave300 [2016-04-01 13:51:30 +0000 UTC]

Ummm no she comes from plant

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SilverJJ [2014-08-03 12:31:03 +0000 UTC]

Is it normal to read this many times???

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AstralMelodia In reply to SilverJJ [2014-08-03 15:00:56 +0000 UTC]

Perfectly normal

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cogworkhart [2014-07-25 20:39:00 +0000 UTC]

can i do a fic of it please i have be looking for a excuse to do my thirst fic and this may just be it,its always been a passion of mine to find out the origin of chrysalis and i love this one thanks    

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AstralMelodia In reply to cogworkhart [2014-07-25 20:43:30 +0000 UTC]

You have my permission to use the story yes, but you may not use Princess Papillon as she is not my character. You will need to ask the creator who I have mentioned in the description.

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Anime-Greek [2014-07-24 02:12:50 +0000 UTC]

I just realized she has no cutiemark *bangs head on table*

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AstralMelodia In reply to Anime-Greek [2014-07-24 02:13:49 +0000 UTC]

xD

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Anime-Greek In reply to AstralMelodia [2014-07-24 02:29:16 +0000 UTC]

and I watched them twice Dx

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ulterno617 [2014-06-23 19:31:13 +0000 UTC]

oh my god! if my character were to have a backstory, i would defiantly ask you first!

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AstralMelodia In reply to ulterno617 [2014-06-23 19:35:23 +0000 UTC]

I try to make sure everything can and imply it could have very well happened.

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ulterno617 In reply to AstralMelodia [2014-06-23 19:36:00 +0000 UTC]

yes its possible.

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Shadow-warrior85 [2014-06-11 18:06:27 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing.
with this, i have changed my view of Chrysalis.
before she was just a villain with a stone cold heart that fed on the love of others.
now...with this...

...she is not a villain by choice...it is a curse.
one she bared for the ones she loved most, and now one she is forever doomed to bare.

She is as much a victim as everyone who has crossed her path as the Changeling Queen.

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AstralMelodia In reply to Shadow-warrior85 [2014-06-11 21:45:01 +0000 UTC]

Just something to think about

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Shadow-warrior85 In reply to AstralMelodia [2014-06-12 20:20:47 +0000 UTC]

and something to apply to most other villains maybe.

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Adam-Walker [2014-06-07 13:19:07 +0000 UTC]

I've got no comment.

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