Comments: 34
D44T [2010-04-26 14:40:27 +0000 UTC]
so deep and intense.. and so true, i love it!
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GothHazzz [2010-04-22 07:44:30 +0000 UTC]
<3
Love it.
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davejsy [2010-04-08 21:20:50 +0000 UTC]
a cool unfortunately very true poem!!
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kiwi-damnation [2010-02-24 14:24:41 +0000 UTC]
Love is more than hatred,
Which slices at your soul,
And leaves you tattered, battered -bruised,
Without a hand to hold.
Hate's cold negating winters,
That freeze your whole insides,
Leave nothing but a vacuum,
Of anger, pain and pride.
But love is all that's shining,
The early morning sun,
Revealing all that's perfect,
The light in everyone.
Perhaps love takes some chances,
Maybe the risks can fail,
At least we all have lived a day,
And seen what life entails.
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kiwi-damnation In reply to assassin4 [2010-02-24 21:42:50 +0000 UTC]
I didn't want to seem so forward but I wanted to give you a gift of sorts... you know?
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MP08SMP [2010-02-20 20:44:03 +0000 UTC]
Very good and quite moving
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assassin4 In reply to MP08SMP [2010-02-20 23:43:49 +0000 UTC]
thank you!
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AccidentlyInspired [2010-02-05 17:04:13 +0000 UTC]
very cool poem^.^ nice rhyme scheme^.^
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