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Published: 2002-05-03 16:01:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 163; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 27
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I spoke with a ManThe sardonic man with acrid words
He laughs at all that he sees
Solemn words beseeching a grin
As he converses on hate and disease
At first I was shocked
And listened, ill at ease
But when he parted
I had a glimpse of the world he sees
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Wow. I really love this poem.
I read this quickly a few days ago, and it's been stuck in my mind ever since. I had to come back and check it out again. The rhyme scheme here is tight and useful, and the entire poem is pointed and precise.
Very nice.
+fav, forsooth
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Oh man,checked you out through the white-alcemist,and this is definately a fav.mini malistic yet extremely powerful, precise and accurate.Ther e's sth to it...hard to define, but wonderful!
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I ride wild storms all through the night,
Dark,hear my call,obey my might...
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that's an extremely clever poem...
great use of strong, convincing words
The sardonic man with acrid words
nice line......
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Great poem... I like the structure, the content, everything.
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