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AskDamianWayne — Feelings - Weapon
Published: 2012-05-28 03:02:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 2616; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 18
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Written by me.Yeah i know, drama.
But whatever..
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That was very sweet-- the ending was really touching. 
For feedback, I feel you could really grow as a writer by using a beta-- or at least by having someone check over your work before you post it. Word choices, specific names for items (i.e.: something stronger than "Assassin Costume"), and punctuation can really set a good mood.
Keep up the good work.
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Thank you very much.
Yes i should get a beta..My English is pretty bad xD;;
I did not make more short stories because i want to get better at English first.
Thank you for your feedback!
And i will!
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Writing can be a very good exercise for learning another language-- having a native speaker review it and explain any potential mistakes can be very promising. Just make sure they let YOU fix your mistakes on your own.
What is your first language, anyways?
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It is Dutch.
Ugh, i find it more difficult then English >->;
And i'll look if i can find a good Beta-reader :3
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My eyes teared up, that was sad.
And it 1:47 am and my eyes feel heavy soooo yeah lol.
But still, sad stuff. v.v
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I'm gonna cry … ( you really should do a long version ) I want more fluffy dadybat
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Dun cry D:
Hmm i can try to write some more
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aw ~ Fanks ! There's nothing cuter than Damian
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A journal? Short story? Did this really happen?
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Just a short story, i keep my deviations apart of my RP's ))
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Thank you
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We miss you! You have to come back -_-))
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I cannot yet, damian is being controlled, his mother installed devices in his spinal cord, disobey = him losing his free will, littarly becoming a emotionless weapon. ))
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I see. Hurry up.))
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