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Raven6229 [2019-09-05 22:03:21 +0000 UTC]
Hot damn, that is some NICE panel composition. The way Japan acts as his own border for the panel is *fantastic.* Only thing I might change is adding some motion blur or visual effect of some kind to make it more obvious why his hair is flying like it is. Other than that, though, it's phenomenal. I love the way you combined them solving the piano puzzle with Japan's visions. It's seamless. Great work, overall! Very impressed with this strip!
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arunhdan In reply to Raven6229 [2019-09-06 12:42:21 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
Yeah, I tried showing the movement with that line at the top of the panel, as well as blurring the lower half of his body to show that it's closer to the viewer than the rest, but obviously if I have to point it out then I didn't make it clear enough... That angle was a challenge to begin with ^^'
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EddieVeneziano [2019-09-04 10:07:10 +0000 UTC]
God I see so much improvement in your style
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95Jezzica [2019-09-02 15:59:59 +0000 UTC]
Well, I guess that's just how life is sometimes. x)
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