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Published: 2015-07-26 13:45:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 1503; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 93
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Description Polygirl opened up the garage door of the Guardians complex.  "Now, just take it easy on the throt..." She started to say when the high whine, squealing tires, and the smell of burning rubber interrupted her.  As she stood there coughing, she looked out at the vanishing dot in the distance and thought "Oh well, at least it seems she likes it."

Major Renown's ponytail whipped furiously as she brought her new motorcycle, the PG-001, up to 90mph/145kph through the city streets.  Wringing out the bike was the first thing on her mind.  Running places and jumping over rooftops did the job when she needed to get somewhere, but the bike was a status symbol to her.  It meant that she was an actual superhero, just like in the comics.  The handling was amazing!  There was a gyroscope built in that allowed her to stand on the bike and still be level, but she could turn it off when she wanted some human finesse.  The power plant was a Polygirl design, so Juniper had no idea what the thing ran on, but it was extremely powerful.

As she wound through the streets, she saw a couple of Angel Falls' finest.  Wanting all of the AFPD to know that she now had a vehicle, she decided to "thread the needle".  As she passed the urban uniformed duo, she looked back and shouted "Sorry about that!"

Major Renown, Juniper Goldman, PG-001 ©
PolyGirl ©
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Comments: 11

Kmon13 [2015-07-28 08:59:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow I like the way how it was done and the Illustration went well with the short story too.

I just wondering what action music would go with it? 

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artguyjoe In reply to Kmon13 [2015-07-28 18:39:29 +0000 UTC]

Duke Nukem Theme Song

youtu.be/BD3VJGDqphM

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Lady-Quantum [2015-07-28 02:04:12 +0000 UTC]

Like the motion of this, great job with it Joe! Is the tire texture off a bit, or did it's tread just not show up right?

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artguyjoe In reply to Lady-Quantum [2015-07-28 02:15:22 +0000 UTC]

They are supposed to be slicks.

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Lady-Quantum In reply to artguyjoe [2015-07-28 02:28:26 +0000 UTC]

Ah, okay.

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LoneStranger [2015-07-27 02:31:35 +0000 UTC]

That's funny, and it sounds about right.

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Stick-bag [2015-07-27 02:15:56 +0000 UTC]

See, it's that kind of irresponsible behaviour that causes the J. Jonah Jamesons of the world to start mouthing off.

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Knight3000 [2015-07-26 20:43:20 +0000 UTC]

Pretty cool ride

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kittyelfie [2015-07-26 20:41:25 +0000 UTC]

Do you think it could be powered by a large wind-up key?  Maybe a friction motor?  Is there an enormous rubber band inside it that is wound up?

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Rachel12 [2015-07-26 20:04:54 +0000 UTC]

Love this work, see the action and motion, and I really like the Major. Hope to see her in your patreon work.

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artguyjoe In reply to Rachel12 [2015-07-27 00:17:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh no, she is only for "soft core" here on D.A.

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