Comments: 32
grixit [2007-12-06 07:17:43 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Really captures the essence of a coffee house. "The people are the location", i think i'll steal that sentiment.
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APerfectSoul [2007-12-06 01:17:21 +0000 UTC]
The detail on this is amazing, and yet it still remains impressionistic. A well deserved Daily Deviation. Congratulations.
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destinycreature [2007-12-06 00:20:44 +0000 UTC]
Interesting illustration.....I love the natrual feel to it....its the feel missing in alot of today's modern art
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artfulshrapnel In reply to destinycreature [2007-12-06 02:07:50 +0000 UTC]
Yeah... it's that feel that's been the hardest to recreate in future peices. I've tried several times but never managed to get it again. Will have to be a focus of future work I suppose. Thanks for the comment!
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destinycreature In reply to artfulshrapnel [2007-12-13 02:23:26 +0000 UTC]
Nope.....its the wrath of God. Ever though he may be angry with you?
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artfulshrapnel In reply to FoxLi [2007-12-06 02:09:17 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Glad to know you like my work. Your stuff is absolutely adorable, you might like my friend Kate's stuff, too. (kinda reminds me of your work) She doesn't have a DA page that I know of, but her website it at [link]
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UlaFish [2007-12-05 20:04:39 +0000 UTC]
Holy shit, that's Big E's!
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UlaFish In reply to artfulshrapnel [2007-12-05 23:57:54 +0000 UTC]
I do be a Ringling-ite! Thanks for linking me to Violet's page, I love her art and she's awesome. The moment I saw that deviation of yours I was like "wait a second...whoa!!"
Makes the world (of deviantart at least) seem quite tiny.
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Kitkaze [2007-12-05 16:45:03 +0000 UTC]
The color pallet is fantastic!
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artfulshrapnel In reply to Kitkaze [2007-12-05 21:31:48 +0000 UTC]
Some credit to for that goes to E, the owner of the shop. That couch is CRAZY red.
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WerterSkelterNOW [2007-12-05 11:36:35 +0000 UTC]
so simple....but very detailed too...
lovely!
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katizua [2007-03-31 18:23:29 +0000 UTC]
Very nice sketches! I like the colors and swirly text. The way you went into details with the couch is very lovlely. Gesture on the figure is nice she really feels like she's reclining on the couch.
only one thing >,<
Mr. Ean you need to go and sit down every day and draw 5 hands. It helps!!! It's how i leared and they are still hard.
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artfulshrapnel In reply to katizua [2007-03-31 22:31:37 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, glad you liked it.
And you're totally right. my hands are terrible. I'm acutally in the middle of a figure-drawing refresher and in light of this I'm gonna go onto hands this week. Probably gonna take a few more than 5 to get me out of my rut, tho.
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Shadowcy [2007-03-30 23:06:14 +0000 UTC]
it come out pretty nice, I think I like the coffe cups the best though, heh.
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artfulshrapnel In reply to Shadowcy [2007-03-31 22:30:25 +0000 UTC]
They're the first thing I drew for this project too. I was just crashed out at E's and doodled my cup of tea... never occurred to me that they would be useable for the final project.
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Cloud-07 [2007-03-30 13:20:10 +0000 UTC]
You should create a version of this as an advertisement for E. I think it would work well. Overall it came out fantastic, although I think the boundary between where it says three cups and the blue of the second image is a bit too harsh for the soft theme you have going on. Its also very apparent down and a little to the left of that too where the chair is overlapped. I think just a little bit of feathering would do the trick
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Cloud-07 In reply to Cloud-07 [2007-03-30 13:23:32 +0000 UTC]
Also, something I noticed when it was smaller, the couch on the bottom is actually higher contrast and stands out more, where the couch on the top appears to be much more subdued, also the figure seems to blend into the background of the couch. Unless it was intentional, I don't feel its fitting with your theme of the character being more important. If she is the focus I would think that she would be the visual focal point. So there, thats what you damn well get when you ask for an advanced critique. hehe
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artfulshrapnel In reply to Cloud-07 [2007-03-30 15:50:12 +0000 UTC]
yeah, you've got a point. I'll mess with the contrast levels in the first image and try to pull her out more... and for the soft thing, it's really unresolved. It was basically a 2AM decision gone right. Wasn't even sure if it was working out.
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Cloud-07 In reply to artfulshrapnel [2007-03-30 17:30:41 +0000 UTC]
Well, you wanted crit, you got it hehe.
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Robincanada [2007-03-29 17:57:40 +0000 UTC]
lovely, warm, inviting
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artfulshrapnel In reply to Robincanada [2007-03-29 22:37:59 +0000 UTC]
Heh, E will be glad to hear it. That's what he goes for with his coffee shop, after all.
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