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Jadedalien [2009-07-12 08:37:12 +0000 UTC]
Reminds me of the movie "Quills" and the scene of the Marquis de Sade at the end where he had defiantly written his last story all over the walls in the only "ink" he had left to him.
In this case I wonder if the walls form the words or the words form the walls?
"Make a hole in your calm" That is a great line even if I mis-translated it(I don't read or speak Spanish).
I wonder if making a hole in her calm would be her way past the walls?
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artemisa-69 In reply to Jadedalien [2009-07-12 08:45:50 +0000 UTC]
I haven't seen the movie, although I know a bit of the story... I'll check out that scene...
You translated it quite correctly, actually, it would be more like "I send you water kisses that make hole in your calmness..." but you got the idea. It's a beautiful and sad line... Don't know if making a hole in his calm will help her, but is the only thing she can do, so she tries...
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sidzerowilson [2009-05-07 02:06:55 +0000 UTC]
ke buen trabajo
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Freysvein [2009-01-07 15:48:28 +0000 UTC]
no me gusta bebé. la foto me parece buena reflejando el sentimiento de todas formas. buena "poesía visual".
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greenadadenatura [2008-09-26 09:08:20 +0000 UTC]
gosh..totally great!!awesome
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Shangyne [2008-08-25 22:44:50 +0000 UTC]
fantastic work, very emotional.
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