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Published: 2012-11-11 11:10:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1358; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 12
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A study for a new project. Children's novel.
All the illustrations (except from the cover) must be in B&W, the book with be published so.
for me, as a color lover, it's a challenge.
( *pen + ink + )': )
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Fantastic!
But I have to say, that you could have done the head (and face) of the girl in the foreground better. It's irritating that the girl has got a wide head (Actually, not bad, but in this, it doesn't look right) and the others in thebackground have got round heads. And the eyes of her are standing a little bit too much apart, don't you agree? That should have been improved. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
But besides of this, It's brilliant! You managed light and shadow really well and that you used pencil and ink (and no coulours) makes it just better. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
And then the title: Alone within other. Amazing!
You are in the middle of a classroom, children are playing and having fun. And you are sitting alone, studying. And your only friend is a bird. Which is cute, I just noticed.
Great work! ^^
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Wow, thanks for taking time writing this (:
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No matter..
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I love your drawings! This is just perfect for a childrens book. I'm jealous
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Cute, the bird is hard to spot. Maybe darken the girls shirt in the background a bit where its highlight is all white that could make the bird stand out more.
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hmm, good suggestion, I'll do that. Thanks
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hmm, good suggestion, I'll do that. Thanks
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Yes, I can understand, because I love color too! But B&W can be even more powerful, because we don't have the colors to distract us!
Great title and your illustration conveys that "aloneness" very well!
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