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Published: 2014-12-29 09:18:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 483; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 3
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Description A new landscape popping out. Took me less than a week this time.
I am not very happy with the light, I don't think it is very readable, but I don't really see what else I could do.

Mechanical pencil 2B to 8B.
Fountain pens.
45x60cm
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Comments: 14

thewolfcreek [2015-08-22 23:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Fine work and detail...

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AntoineRozel In reply to thewolfcreek [2016-11-18 19:19:28 +0000 UTC]

thanks! Sorry for the late reply
A.

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thewolfcreek In reply to AntoineRozel [2016-11-23 08:58:02 +0000 UTC]

Very welcome my friend...no worries...

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kathia909 [2014-12-31 08:21:12 +0000 UTC]

"In that immerse you look and you lose."-by N.Stanescu

...lyrics of a compatriot...

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AntoineRozel In reply to kathia909 [2015-01-01 11:51:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for this comment I don't know this citation. I should read him, should I?
A.

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kathia909 In reply to AntoineRozel [2015-01-02 19:58:06 +0000 UTC]

I've hate this poet in highschool,I was anΒ ignorant about him,but with the age comes abouve the patience and the voices inside us.

PS:yes if you find a good translation,it's something that will remain.

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citypainter [2014-12-29 15:13:43 +0000 UTC]

Very cool, reminds me quite a bit of a Hokusai for some reason...

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AntoineRozel In reply to citypainter [2014-12-29 19:04:45 +0000 UTC]

Hokusai!? I don't think you could pay me a better compliment! Thank you!

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citypainter In reply to AntoineRozel [2014-12-29 20:00:30 +0000 UTC]

Haha I'm just stating the facts.Β  Take care.

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martinkaspar [2014-12-29 13:02:15 +0000 UTC]

Great drawing! I like how the (quite) thick lines make it all look a little cartoony, but the shading is realistic. It's a nice combination.
You wrote in the description that it's not very readable. Wouldn't it help if the foreground was darker? When I look at the picture, the light grass in the foreground blends in with the rocks in the middle of the scene a little. Just a thought, maybe it's nonsense

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AntoineRozel In reply to martinkaspar [2014-12-29 19:59:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
Yes indeed making a darker foreground would help the reading. I wanted to play with the light a bit yes it does not make the whole stuff readable enough.
I might work on it again then. But even though I feel like the whole stuff is too bright. Maybe I don't like this technique anymore.
Thanks for the feedback!
A.

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martinkaspar In reply to AntoineRozel [2015-01-01 09:27:45 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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delph-ambi [2014-12-29 09:42:52 +0000 UTC]

Exquisite. I spent ages looking at this one, exploring it.

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AntoineRozel In reply to delph-ambi [2014-12-29 10:03:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Wow your gallery is interesting
Antoine

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