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Description i have layers of you built into me
like brickwork like
architecture 
or maybe just a lasagna,

you see there's nothing
quite like having your limbs
tremble because you want someone
inside them so badly,
but i'm beginning to realise that
i didn't really like the way you used to
text me, with all punctuation in the
wrong places and words spelled so wrong
that half of the time, i couldn't even
work out what you were trying to say

and sweetheart don't get me wrong,
i'm not being pretentious, i'm just consciously
trying to pick out these flaws which i have
tried to hide behind all this time,
because truth be told, i don't wanna let go.
and that's the first step in moving on.

the sucky thing about this is that
now that i've wrote this poem, i'm going to associate 
you with lasagna and italian food 
and well,
that's just another part of my life that i'm going
to keep discovering you in.

please just get out.
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Comments: 8

ilyilaice [2014-08-04 11:05:52 +0000 UTC]

the sucky thing about this is that
now that i've wrote this poem, i'm going to associate 
you with lasagna and italian food 
and well,
that's just another part of my life that i'm going
to keep discovering you in.

please just get out.

oh god. no truer words were ever spoken. it's ridiculous, when you're infatuated/in love with someone the powers of association are craaaaaazy. so many things get ruined. but please no not the pasta.

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anobrain In reply to ilyilaice [2014-08-04 12:30:20 +0000 UTC]

hahaha not the pastaaaa!

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ilyilaice In reply to anobrain [2014-08-04 13:13:29 +0000 UTC]

Pasta is sacred. My gf makes me pasta sometimes so I get good associations from it. Aw yeah.

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brokengod--veins [2014-04-03 15:09:21 +0000 UTC]

this is fucking hilarious

but i'm beginning to realise that
i didn't really like the way you used to
text me, with all punctuation in the
wrong places and words spelled so wrong
that half of the time, i couldn't even
work out what you were trying to say

I lost it at this part xD I know what it's like too

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anobrain In reply to brokengod--veins [2014-04-04 09:47:15 +0000 UTC]

i'm so glad you think so thank you

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brokengod--veins In reply to anobrain [2014-04-04 12:22:21 +0000 UTC]

anytime dearie

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Life-Beautiful-dream [2014-03-28 03:32:54 +0000 UTC]

This is a hilariously great piece.

When she has dated a guy for several months, and he still can't remember her name...
 
* One guy I know is getting married to a girl whose last name is Gustafson. He still says "Guffason."

.... 

 The last stanza it might read slightly better like this:  

.... about this is now that I've wrote this poem, 

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anobrain In reply to Life-Beautiful-dream [2014-03-28 08:58:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you! 
haha really?!
i'm gonna change that now thank you, i can totally see what you mean
have a lovely day

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