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Published: 2014-01-12 22:36:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 849; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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Description all the fallen eyelashes in the world 

couldn't make your wishes come true,

no burning ball of ice millions of miles 

above you is gonna get you to where 

you want to be


stop wishing - 


buy an old RV and send a handwritten

note to the boy you love, you don't

need dependency, you're way too strong

for that, love you could carry the galaxy

like a backpack and still be able to hold

his hand


do not underestimate yourself - 


every moment is a new opportunity, so 

seize it.

greet spontaneity like an old friend and 

walk hand in hand with it because you 

deserve to be able to speak whatever you

want, if you feel it then it's real

and if it's real then it should be in reality,


there are trillions of inklings of hope tucked

beneath your finger tips and on the edges

of your tongue, there are horizons carved

into the balls of your feet


so run

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Comments: 18

shep4life [2014-07-22 01:45:55 +0000 UTC]

Wonderfully positive!

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anobrain In reply to shep4life [2014-07-23 08:27:09 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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shep4life In reply to anobrain [2014-07-23 17:10:34 +0000 UTC]

It's rare to see positive on DA so bravo!

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anobrain In reply to shep4life [2014-07-29 00:33:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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shep4life In reply to anobrain [2014-07-29 01:33:52 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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imperfect-parachute [2014-01-25 09:05:58 +0000 UTC]

...love you could carry the galaxy

like a backpack and still be able to hold

his hand


I love those lines. That is just beautiful!! As is the whole poem! So beautiful!! Well done!!

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anobrain In reply to imperfect-parachute [2014-01-25 12:24:51 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

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imperfect-parachute In reply to anobrain [2014-01-26 01:50:59 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome

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haphazardmelody [2014-01-14 07:17:55 +0000 UTC]

This is just so hopeful. And those last two words with no punctuation, I really like that. It makes the whole thing more open-ended for me. (I hope that makes sense haha.)

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anobrain In reply to haphazardmelody [2014-01-14 16:18:06 +0000 UTC]

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focusloser [2014-01-13 21:33:35 +0000 UTC]

It's nice to see an in-your-face, non-"fluffy" form of motivational anything.

Certainly a good poem. Also, it flowed well and it was clear where the emphasis was. I also liked your analogies, though the "galaxy like a backpack" part confused me a little. Mapbe I just missed something.

Anyway, awesome 

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anobrain In reply to focusloser [2014-01-14 16:17:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much, i'm glad you liked it - i'll leave the galaxy thing to your imagination

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Story-of-a-Mind [2014-01-13 15:10:45 +0000 UTC]

So much power and hope and motivation in this! This sign says: go for it, do it.
Great, motivational poem!

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anobrain In reply to Story-of-a-Mind [2014-01-13 17:20:02 +0000 UTC]

exactly my intention thank you

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jessigoldfish [2014-01-13 02:44:20 +0000 UTC]

I feel so uplifted from reading this, it made the world seem a little brighter. Great job!!

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anobrain In reply to jessigoldfish [2014-01-13 17:19:32 +0000 UTC]

i'm so pleased, thank you

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saltwaterlungs [2014-01-13 01:53:03 +0000 UTC]

Inspirational poems, heck yeah! Love the second stanza the most!

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anobrain In reply to saltwaterlungs [2014-01-13 17:19:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!

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