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AnnaMeiWang [2016-08-06 01:16:48 +0000 UTC]

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Ahhhh I love seeing graphic designers on DA :3 Ok so now for the critiques. The main concern that really stood out to me was the style and placement of the author (Regina Falanges). The bevel, font, shadow, and gold color gives off a really cool effect for the title, but for smaller text such as the author, it seems a bit too overpowering. I suggest sticking to a simple and professional look for that. As for the title text, the only thing that could be improved on is sort of blending the text into the image more, so that the bright gold color doesn't stick out like a sore thumb. Of course, you want the title to stand out, though there is a difference between standing out and being out of place. Now for the photo manipulation. The overall image is really cool, and I can only imagine how many layers and editing went into it. I like how you stuck to the same lighting/color scheme for all the layers, and the concept of the floating islands in the background is super cool. However, you could maybe enlarge the model, since I'm assuming that she is the focus of the design. Also, work a bit more on your cropping and background removal techniques. There is a faint outline around the floating islands in the background. Other than that, I think that this is a pretty well done design. You displayed skills for photo manipulation, and I love your vision for this.

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E-DinaPhotoArt [2016-10-09 17:12:02 +0000 UTC]

Well done.

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Abbysidian [2016-08-06 21:24:18 +0000 UTC]

This is great! Pls teach me senpai lol

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StarsColdNight [2016-08-06 12:32:18 +0000 UTC]

dont forget to read my commercial rules

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