Comments: 6
ScottMan2th [2011-11-21 21:19:26 +0000 UTC]
version two: (much better i think)
All alone, all alone...
shiver shiver cold
wind blowing, blowing now,
huddle into wings
waiting waiting, for the sun
to nudge the shadows ‘way
hoping, hoping for someone
to maybe throw out seed
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AnnaNicola In reply to ScottMan2th [2011-11-22 15:04:48 +0000 UTC]
It's certainly not every pigeon that has its very own poem! Thanks! ^^
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ScottMan2th [2011-11-21 19:36:29 +0000 UTC]
All, all alone...
shiver shiver cold
wind blowing now,
huddle into wings
waiting waiting, for the sun
to nudge the shadows ‘way
hoping, hoping for someone
to maybe throw out seed
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latinosweetie [2011-11-20 21:15:34 +0000 UTC]
so sad, how many times we fell like the poor pigeon. excellent
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