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Published: 2007-12-05 22:55:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 184; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description White noise waves
crash inside my head
The constant whir
of static motions
tempted screams and
tortured moans
That mix and swirl
and agonise

I try to scream
but the heads would turn
the eyes would burn,
and the questions start
So i sit quietly
inside my head
and suffer in silence

If only i could make
hearing dust and vision vapor
to gain respite
and rest in void
Let silence grace my mind
and smile rest upon my lips
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Comments: 5

taste-some-death [2007-12-08 20:13:23 +0000 UTC]

is good! lol

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taste-some-death [2007-12-08 20:12:41 +0000 UTC]

is good! lol

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incubustrav421 [2007-12-06 01:46:05 +0000 UTC]

There is a strong wishful feeling, a waverly passion for something stronger and wanting ... love the use of the diction to swirl around ... Great job

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annanias In reply to incubustrav421 [2007-12-08 16:17:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks man. nice to know i havent lost my touch lol. whats a waverly passion?

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incubustrav421 In reply to annanias [2007-12-09 17:02:19 +0000 UTC]

another meaning to strong flow

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