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AnImperfectCircle — Reoccurring Cycle
Published: 2005-04-27 01:08:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 81; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description Shaking from the feeling of your presence
Your embracing arms wrap around me
As a Boa constricts its meat
You’re the sickness I endure every so often
You stare at me with those hypnotic eyes..
Once I think you’re gone
You attack my immune system once again

You are the poison...

And the serpent of regret slithers down my throat
From your poisonous kisses
It eats me away from the inside out
The ever growing hole inside me
Grows bigger with every touch
You lay your eggs in my heart

You are the poison…
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Comments: 12

a-girl [2005-05-02 15:42:20 +0000 UTC]

i really liked this poem... so much that it makes me want to draw my interpretation of it... if you don't mind i think i will, but only when the holiday starts as i'm swamped with school work now.

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AnImperfectCircle In reply to a-girl [2005-05-02 19:18:08 +0000 UTC]

that'd be awesome! I would appreciate it very much ^^

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EmilyStrange21 [2005-04-27 02:26:11 +0000 UTC]

It's not 'reocurring', it's recurring. Sorry, not trying to be picky here, just thought I'd let you know. I like the vocabulary in the poem and the meaning. I can relate to it often.

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AnImperfectCircle In reply to EmilyStrange21 [2005-04-27 22:31:44 +0000 UTC]

oh no problem. that's what critiquing is for!

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murdermedoll [2005-04-27 01:22:55 +0000 UTC]

wow, this is very brilliant and clever

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AnImperfectCircle In reply to murdermedoll [2005-04-27 22:30:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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murdermedoll In reply to AnImperfectCircle [2005-04-30 01:00:02 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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LongingToBreath [2005-04-27 01:10:32 +0000 UTC]

nice I like it...~`~

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AnImperfectCircle In reply to LongingToBreath [2005-04-27 01:14:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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LongingToBreath In reply to AnImperfectCircle [2005-04-27 01:33:59 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome~`~

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OhSoNaive [2005-04-27 01:10:25 +0000 UTC]

......... This is fantastic.

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AnImperfectCircle In reply to OhSoNaive [2005-04-27 01:13:55 +0000 UTC]

xD thank you!! I created this piece to express how people feel when they get sucked into certain things. Sometimes when they believe their strong, Their really very weak.

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