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animeFeind โ€” Maybe Tommoro...(crappy poem)
Published: 2004-03-26 01:34:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 326; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 15
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Description when your day is drowned in water,
when you can't breath in.
and when you think you're going to the slaughter,
because you're giving up now and then.
then, right before you lay your head for sleeping,
think less of the neverending sorrow;
instead, begin the thought of thinking:
maybe, just maybe, tomorrow.

rub your stomach from hunger pains,
and heal your wrists from rubbing chains.
never forget what you're supposed to remember,
and there's always a hope grown from hot ember.
waves may push and start your sinking,
through the lonely depths of sorrow.
but, remember, once you begin your thinking,
that hope lasts, atleast until tomorrow.

when the wind pulls from you a lonely cry,
then drowns it into a distant sigh,
and when you can't quite figure out why,
your cheeks are never dry.
and, when you'ld hate for another day to follow,
because what's happened is a little hard to swollow
remember, i have felt your sorrow.
and, i've also seen tomorrow.

i've cried myself to sleep,
even more than the average person could weep.
there i'ld pointlessly lie at bay,
while my tears' shadows turned me gray.
there, in that spot, i'ld stay,
hoping that this day would be taken away.
and there i dreamt of no more dreams of hollow,
so long as this day was named tomorrow.

so, next time you think dying,
as more important than trying.
think of my case,
when nothing was more sad than my face.
think of the many, countless tears,
that fled from your same fears.
remember, i have felt your sorrow.
so think maybe better, maybe a little better, of tomorrow.

-Ada
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Comments: 34

ToujoursJoyuse [2011-03-13 05:39:50 +0000 UTC]

What a no-talented loser she must be! She plagiarized this poem! It was actually written in 2002-2003 by "Michael Wheeler" for his creative writing class.... then she edited, plagiarized and posted it.

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cupid13 [2011-03-12 15:37:19 +0000 UTC]

If you would like to be an artist I suggest that first you become creative yourself and then DO NOT STEAL other peoples work. MAYBE, YOU SHOULD START WITH RETRACTING THIS AS YOUR OWN, OH WAIT YOU CAN NOT WRITE CAN YOU. Okay, I will write it for you. I (your name) stole this poem from Michael Wheeler in High School and I am sorry for taking credit for his creative work and my lack of morality. You know what to do copy and post.

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ToujoursJoyuse [2011-03-12 13:20:32 +0000 UTC]

YES.... It sucks, but 'only' because you are not the original writer. It was actually written in 2002-2003 by "Michael Wheeler" for his creative writing class.... then edited, plagiarized and posted by you. Shame on you, Ada, for trying to take credit for another's work!

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ToujoursJoyuse [2011-03-12 13:15:56 +0000 UTC]

YES.... It sucks, but 'only' because you are not the original writer. It was actually written in 2002-2003 by "Michael Wheeler" for his creative writing class.... then edited, plagiarized and posted by you. Shame on you, Ada.

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Apelcius [2011-03-12 08:56:01 +0000 UTC]

perhaps if it sucked so much, you shouldn't have copied it from me

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Apelcius [2011-03-12 08:52:33 +0000 UTC]

you know, you better hope you haven't taken credit for this... i am the original writer... way to jack someone's poem.

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dollXparts [2004-03-28 22:03:11 +0000 UTC]

ADA! you poet you, wonderful job! *mwah*

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ToujoursJoyuse In reply to dollXparts [2011-03-12 13:22:31 +0000 UTC]

She plagiarized this poem!

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necromancer901 In reply to dollXparts [2004-03-29 20:05:27 +0000 UTC]

:nijastar:

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necromancer901 In reply to necromancer901 [2004-03-29 20:06:08 +0000 UTC]

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ToujoursJoyuse In reply to necromancer901 [2011-03-13 05:23:31 +0000 UTC]

She plagiarized this poem.... then has the nerve to call it crappy.... lol.

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necromancer901 In reply to dollXparts [2004-03-29 20:04:04 +0000 UTC]

what are you thinking it was allmost bad.

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animeFeind In reply to dollXparts [2004-03-28 22:04:59 +0000 UTC]

awww shucks thanks gina

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thornasneedles [2004-03-26 01:56:29 +0000 UTC]

This is wonderful Ada. You should much much more. I love this, great job.

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ToujoursJoyuse In reply to thornasneedles [2011-03-13 05:47:34 +0000 UTC]

She plagiarized this poem! It was actually written in 2002-2003 by "Michael Wheeler" for his creative writing class.... then she edited, plagiarized and posted it, taking credit for another's work.... what a no-talent loser!

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ToujoursJoyuse In reply to thornasneedles [2011-03-13 05:34:38 +0000 UTC]

She plagiarized this poem! It was actually written in 2002-2003 by "Michael Wheeler" for his creative writing class.... then she edited, plagiarized and posted it. What a loser.

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animeFeind In reply to thornasneedles [2004-03-26 02:00:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks , i like my other poems better but thanks

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ToujoursJoyuse In reply to animeFeind [2011-03-13 05:50:31 +0000 UTC]

What other poems? Someone else's work you are trying to take credit for? Obviously you have none of your own, or there would be no need for you to have stolen this one. LOSER!

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ToujoursJoyuse In reply to animeFeind [2011-03-13 05:30:20 +0000 UTC]

Are all your other poems plagiarized too? Because you certainly plagiarized this one. It was actually written in 2002-2003 by "Michael Wheeler" for his creative writing class.... then you edited, plagiarized and posted it. What a no-talent loser you must be!

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ToujoursJoyuse In reply to animeFeind [2011-03-13 05:17:11 +0000 UTC]

Did you steal them too?

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thornasneedles In reply to animeFeind [2004-03-26 02:30:21 +0000 UTC]

Well i like this one, so there.

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ToujoursJoyuse In reply to thornasneedles [2011-03-13 05:27:51 +0000 UTC]

She plagiarized this poem! It was actually written in 2002-2003 by "Michael Wheeler" for his creative writing class.... then she edited, plagiarized and posted it. What a loser.

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animeFeind In reply to thornasneedles [2004-03-26 20:13:06 +0000 UTC]

lol, so my other poems suck ?

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ToujoursJoyuse In reply to animeFeind [2011-03-13 05:33:01 +0000 UTC]

Probably! Since you have to plagiarize someone elses talent in order to take credit for anything. Did you ever write anything yourself? LOSER!

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thornasneedles In reply to animeFeind [2004-03-27 06:06:16 +0000 UTC]

No, but i love this one.

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ToujoursJoyuse In reply to thornasneedles [2011-03-13 05:35:00 +0000 UTC]

She plagiarized this poem! It was actually written in 2002-2003 by "Michael Wheeler" for his creative writing class.... then she edited, plagiarized and posted it. What a loser.

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ToujoursJoyuse In reply to thornasneedles [2011-03-13 05:26:50 +0000 UTC]

She plagiarized this poem! It was actually written in 2002-2003 by "Michael Wheeler" for his creative writing class.... then she edited, plagiarized and posted it. What a loser.

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animeFeind In reply to thornasneedles [2004-03-27 17:51:10 +0000 UTC]

lol okay

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Aadore [2004-03-26 01:35:39 +0000 UTC]

c'est trรจs triste!

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necromancer901 In reply to Aadore [2004-03-26 11:33:48 +0000 UTC]

Thats Freanch right?

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animeFeind In reply to Aadore [2004-03-26 01:36:26 +0000 UTC]

um...in english please but since your adding it to your favorites i guess it was a good comment

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Aadore In reply to animeFeind [2004-03-26 01:37:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah... I said it was kind of sad ... very good

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ToujoursJoyuse In reply to Aadore [2011-03-13 05:46:06 +0000 UTC]

What a no-talented loser she must be! She plagiarized this poem! It was actually written in 2002-2003 by "Michael Wheeler" for his creative writing class.... then she edited, plagiarized and posted it, taking credit for another's work.... what a no-talent loser!

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animeFeind In reply to Aadore [2004-03-26 01:38:05 +0000 UTC]

oh okay, thanks

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