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Published: 2004-05-08 14:45:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 12
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Description I lie awake in wonder.
I sit up straight in fear.
I see the faces staring back
and wonder why I'm here.

The knife will glide right through my flesh
and ill feel a sense of bliss.
When you see my dead corpse bloodied,
it is me who you'll not miss.

I'll cut myself wide open
so maybe you can see
I hate the way I hate myself.
I just don't want to be.

So when I'm dead and in the ground
Will those faces still stare through me?
They see right past the me inside
If they only knew what they see

-Ada
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Comments: 16

LackOfColor [2004-05-16 20:57:30 +0000 UTC]

awe sad

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DarkZoneGraphics [2004-05-08 18:22:17 +0000 UTC]

Everyone, whether they want to admit it or not, has that feeling that, if they ended their existence, would they be missed at all? And if so WHO would miss them and what about themselves would these people miss? Would we be missed because of who we were or who we portrayed ourselves as?

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kfnguy In reply to DarkZoneGraphics [2004-05-08 20:47:19 +0000 UTC]

thats deep ... very deep

ive had that feeling recently...i felt like ending it all cause my Xgirlfriend dumped me and well....i love her and when me and her stopped doing stuff i just felt so shitty and didnt want to do anything and anything i did do it felt so wrong cause it wasnt with her. Well yea i know what u mean by that cause i wondered if anyone would miss me.

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animeFeind In reply to DarkZoneGraphics [2004-05-08 20:41:16 +0000 UTC]

thats very very true.

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thornasneedles [2004-05-08 17:25:42 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.. submit more poetry damnit.

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animeFeind In reply to thornasneedles [2004-05-08 19:07:22 +0000 UTC]

i shall!

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necromancer901 [2004-05-08 16:03:21 +0000 UTC]

sad dark and some of your best work in suside poetry I like it and I will put it on my fav's

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animeFeind In reply to necromancer901 [2004-05-08 19:10:37 +0000 UTC]

thanks yo!

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necromancer901 In reply to animeFeind [2004-05-09 15:27:19 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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Anime221 [2004-05-08 15:16:32 +0000 UTC]

that poem was sad.......

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animeFeind In reply to Anime221 [2004-05-08 15:22:47 +0000 UTC]

yeah.

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Anime221 In reply to animeFeind [2004-05-08 15:35:57 +0000 UTC]

good rhymes though..

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animeFeind In reply to Anime221 [2004-05-08 15:41:17 +0000 UTC]

i dont usally like to rhyme but yeah, thanks for the comment andy ^_^

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Anime221 In reply to animeFeind [2004-05-08 17:33:57 +0000 UTC]

n e time n.n

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morbiddreamweaver [2004-05-08 14:47:04 +0000 UTC]

I loves your avatar.... Misfits rok!

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animeFeind In reply to morbiddreamweaver [2004-05-08 14:48:53 +0000 UTC]

haha alright, thanks.

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