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animeAWESOME — Till Love Do Us Part
Published: 2011-03-29 03:41:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description Should I, or should I not?

The question that has been haunting my dreams.

Haunting my Heart.

Haunting my sleep.

Haunting my part

Of showing my love and respect

Which I suspect,

To be good enough for you,

But then again, I don't know what to do.

Scarred by past loves, cautious and aware.

I over think, over do, and I can't bear

The thought of leaving you.

Isn't too soon?

Am I committing the same mistake as before?

Am I a dirty whore?

Am I ready for this new relationship?

and I admit,

You're better than the rest of those dicks.

But just let me say,

Will you stay?

Despite all my faults,

Will you shrug them off the spot?

Or will you be like the rest,

And do what you think is best?

Tear my heart, yet again,

And make me forget Love, once again?

You could be "Mr. Right"

Or you could be just another sight, another fight,

Or even another light.

I blame the men,

Who I let in,

So don't take this personally,

Because firstly,

I must recognize

And organize

My thoughts, feelings, everything kept inside

And just decide,

Should I, or should I not?

Till Love Do Us Part.
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Comments: 11

MissMachineArt [2011-04-30 00:45:26 +0000 UTC]

this is prolly one of your best writings! wonderfully constructed. and dont worry hun u have such a long and full life ahead of you. dont get caught up in the past :] always look forward and trust me eventually youll make the right choice and so will he.

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animeAWESOME In reply to MissMachineArt [2011-04-30 03:18:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you (:

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converse-17 [2011-03-29 20:14:17 +0000 UTC]

wow this is really good

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animeAWESOME In reply to converse-17 [2011-03-29 23:52:32 +0000 UTC]

thanks c: i actually thought this was sloppy though :/ cuz i made this in like 5 mins in the middle of the night to release emotions/thoughts lol c:

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converse-17 In reply to animeAWESOME [2011-03-30 23:58:15 +0000 UTC]

dude omg no i didnt even notice you wrote it until by like the middle when i was like omg this is f*ckin amazing who wrote this?!? and then i was like wtf?? cuz i didnt know you wrote so well lmao!!! <333

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animeAWESOME In reply to converse-17 [2011-03-31 19:14:57 +0000 UTC]

lol really?? XDD thanks c:


yeah, i got the talent, i just don't use it as much, except lately...lol XD


but thank you so very much c: it means a lot!!!

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converse-17 In reply to animeAWESOME [2011-04-01 22:55:10 +0000 UTC]

^^ <3

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mrt125 [2011-03-29 05:19:09 +0000 UTC]

Very well writen, and I get where your coming from all too much<3

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animeAWESOME In reply to mrt125 [2011-03-29 19:59:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you c: i actually thought this was sloppy though lol c: <3

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mrt125 In reply to animeAWESOME [2011-03-30 16:48:39 +0000 UTC]

Nah, man! I love it<3

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animeAWESOME In reply to mrt125 [2011-03-31 19:15:26 +0000 UTC]

c: well thank you c: <3

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